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PostSubject: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:02 am

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after writing that story i felt like writing an alternate ending

there was two people, a boy and a girl, they had never met before. she from an upper class family, he, a lowly blacksmith's son. one day the boy heard about a masquerade ball and decided to go, he planned to put on a simple mask and sneak in from the back. while at the ball the girl was sitting on a balcony high above the party, as soon as the boy entered he saw her and fell in love with her. after the ball he watched as she got into her carriage and followed it all the way home. when he did he sat in the bushes waiting to catch a glimpse of her. he waited for what seemed like hours until he saw her in the window. so he picked up a handful of pebbles and threw them at her window, when she opened them she saw him and she too fell in love. the boy was stunned by her beauty, but the the girls father came out and yelled "stay away from my daughter", and threatened the boy with a sword.

the girl started crying for for father to stop. he chased the boy away from his estate. the next night when the girl was in her garden the boy sneaked passed the guards and met her there but before she could say a thing he kissed her on the lips, embracing her as he did, and whispered "we mustn't speak because if they hear us we're dead". and that is how it started every night they would meet in the gardens and embrace each other, the girl would bring a lantern as a signal that it was her.

but one night the boy didn't come , the girl waited and waited but he never came, but after 6 nights she gave up, until one day, while taking a walk she heard a group of people whispering, when she asked what they were talking about, what she heard next destroyed everything she was, they said that the blacksmiths son was killed 6 days ago, she started running to the boy's fathers workshop, repeatably "they're wrong, they're wrong!" but when she got there her fears were validated, the boy was dead. she asked the boy's father what happened, he said simple, "ask your father" she knew at once who the boy's killer was.

She ran home, crying. when she got there she found her father in the study, "you monster, why did you kill him!!" tears still coming down her face, he replied bluntly"stop crying, he was a commoner, your to precious to marry such filth!." the girl just broke, she ran to her room, she wrote a note, when she was done she opened her dresser and grad her letter opener, and plunged it into her heart. she wanted to scream but did not. in the morning she was found by her parlor maid, her the father read her note, it read " i have done this so i can be with my love, father you have caused this and now with no wife and no child you family of hate will end with you!.".

if u have no idea what im talking about read 'my first story post' and you'll understand. i also named it Love story
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:34 am

awwwwww if he gets a bunny
y can't i get a kermit the frog smoking pot TT~TT
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:09 am

-goes hunting-

mmm...this was so much faster! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:26 pm

thats a ciggarette, not pot D=
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:48 am

Cool i like love storys for a reason i do not know myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:49 am

that makes sooooo much sense!!!

but no woriz! so do we! Very Happy
like Love Story i mean... =D
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 03, 2009 5:12 am

i think this is better then my other one, better ending!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:29 am

yea it is Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:08 am

ty XD
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 08, 2009 5:40 am

ur welcome! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Mar 09, 2009 5:13 am

im pretty good at writing so if anyone has any ideas about a story pm me the details and ill write it and say whos idea it was at the end.
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:00 am

or let me do it X_X
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:01 pm

OOHHHH make one about a pegasus named Tom Cruise who finds his destiny by following the magic shrew to the relm of happynes and fruit flavored cerial! =D and then at the end, he gets eaten by the giant cheese monster, but he soon breaks out of its belly by befrending the capybara that got trapped in there 4 days ago. they soon come up with a plan to save themselves by feasting on the giant cheese monster (moncerella, btw) and then they both life happily ever after o.o THE END =D

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:41 am

tom cruise is a douche, kate should leave him, forst he wouldnt let her hang out with friends at the Oscars then puts her on a diet that is [b]KILLING HER[b] he will LITERALLY be the death of her. btw i like that story, and rag you no they're gonna give them to you, let me do some DX
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:13 am

plz dont say douche again...
itz...not a very good/nice word...

check it in the dictionary if u're curious...
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:19 am

lol, i know what a douche is... x.x
...if we cant call someone a douche, then can we call them a vagina-washer?

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:41 pm

yes, yes we can.
did anyone know that tom cruise was in tropic thunder?
you dont realise because three things
- He's being funny
- He's being an asshole and swears alot
- He's bald

i was watching the credits, about to leave, and when i see Tom cruise up there, everyone in the crowd was like WHAT THE FUCK!?!?!?
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:35 pm

rofl, odd

tom cruise is a VAGIIINAAA-WASHHEEERRR

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:54 pm

@___@;
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:58 pm

X_X
ange you lez
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:56 am

thought it was something like that...

LEAVE THE POOR GIRL ALONE! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Wed Mar 25, 2009 6:25 pm

when i just met her i always said stuff like that, like;
'OMG SO YOU ARE A LEZ?!?!?!'
'NO YOU LEZ'
'Lol, i cant decide if youre lez or not....'

And her responses;
'KISH DX'
'IM NOT LEZ ._.;'
'etc'
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:25 pm

lol, and those were my exact responses ._.

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Mar 26, 2009 1:58 pm

Rofl =/
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:22 am

good memory for someppl...
bad experiance for others... Very Happy
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