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PostSubject: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:02 am

after writing that story i felt like writing an alternate ending

there was two people, a boy and a girl, they had never met before. she from an upper class family, he, a lowly blacksmith's son. one day the boy heard about a masquerade ball and decided to go, he planned to put on a simple mask and sneak in from the back. while at the ball the girl was sitting on a balcony high above the party, as soon as the boy entered he saw her and fell in love with her. after the ball he watched as she got into her carriage and followed it all the way home. when he did he sat in the bushes waiting to catch a glimpse of her. he waited for what seemed like hours until he saw her in the window. so he picked up a handful of pebbles and threw them at her window, when she opened them she saw him and she too fell in love. the boy was stunned by her beauty, but the the girls father came out and yelled "stay away from my daughter", and threatened the boy with a sword.

the girl started crying for for father to stop. he chased the boy away from his estate. the next night when the girl was in her garden the boy sneaked passed the guards and met her there but before she could say a thing he kissed her on the lips, embracing her as he did, and whispered "we mustn't speak because if they hear us we're dead". and that is how it started every night they would meet in the gardens and embrace each other, the girl would bring a lantern as a signal that it was her.

but one night the boy didn't come , the girl waited and waited but he never came, but after 6 nights she gave up, until one day, while taking a walk she heard a group of people whispering, when she asked what they were talking about, what she heard next destroyed everything she was, they said that the blacksmiths son was killed 6 days ago, she started running to the boy's fathers workshop, repeatably "they're wrong, they're wrong!" but when she got there her fears were validated, the boy was dead. she asked the boy's father what happened, he said simple, "ask your father" she knew at once who the boy's killer was.

She ran home, crying. when she got there she found her father in the study, "you monster, why did you kill him!!" tears still coming down her face, he replied bluntly"stop crying, he was a commoner, your to precious to marry such filth!." the girl just broke, she ran to her room, she wrote a note, when she was done she opened her dresser and grad her letter opener, and plunged it into her heart. she wanted to scream but did not. in the morning she was found by her parlor maid, her the father read her note, it read " i have done this so i can be with my love, father you have caused this and now with no wife and no child you family of hate will end with you!.".

if u have no idea what im talking about read 'my first story post' and you'll understand. i also named it Love story
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:54 pm

D= me no like sad endings
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:30 am

lol i kinda liked this one x]

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:01 am

the end is both happy AND sad, try to guess y!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:22 am

coz the girl is gona be with her lover wen shez dead?

btw i like this ending too! Very Happy
makes sense...
Romeo and Juliet theme all ova again...i guess itz supposed to end this way no metta wat...
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:29 pm

....
necrophelia? o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:21 pm

NO RAG NOOOOO DX
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Mon Feb 23, 2009 11:03 pm

sher is correct *give choclate chip cupcake* hows it necrophilia?
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:48 am

YAY!!! CHOCOLATE!!!

-gets high-

LALALALALALA LAND!!!! LALALALALALA LAND!!!! LALALALALALA LAND!!!!
LALA LAND!! LALA LAND!! LALA LAND!!
LALALALALALA LAND!!!! LALALALALALA LAND!!!! LALALALALALA LAND!!!!
LALALALALA LAND.... geek geek geek
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:30 pm

well
when juliet was pretending to be dead, romeo killed himself because he loves a 'dead' girl, then she wakes up, and shes in love with a dead guy, and she kisses him, MAKING THAT SHE WAS IN LOVE WITH THE DEAD BODY, THATS NECROPHELIA DX
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:12 pm

yesh but they didnt have sex during that time!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:52 am

Shocked

ROFL!!! soz...

i have no idea why...but for some reason that made me laugh! real hard!!!
Rofl!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:33 am

a lot of things on this forum makes me luagh...btw i bought the taylor swift album...THE BEST PURCHISE EVA!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:51 am

YAY HORAY!!! GRATZ

I GOT THE SONG FOR FREE!!!

my dad got this credit card awards thing where u can like get anything u want from this booklet (for free)
and he gave me a itunes card,
my bro an ipod nano(threw away his old ipod mini),
my mum a Blender,
a petrol cash card for himself
and
A FAMILY PACKAGE(2 adults 2 children) DEAL TRIP TO DREAMWORLD FOR 4 DAYS!!! Very Happy
i love my dad!
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:59 am

...
i want a blender T~T
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:06 pm

-throws a blender at rag-
.__. I want a bunny T^T
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:23 am

i'll see if there are any bunnies in that booklet...

-swifts through all the credit card booklets in the world-

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LOOK I FOUND IT!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Fri Feb 27, 2009 6:48 am

is that a ferret?
OMG YEY FERRET =D
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:24 pm

eep .__.
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:28 am

WAT?!
I PERSONALLY WENT THTOUGH HUNDREDZ MAYBE THOUSANDS OF CREDIT CARD BOOKLETS ALL OVA THE WORLD FOR A BUNNY...AND ALL U CAN SAY IS:

blaze7734 wrote:
eep .__.
?????

HMPH!!!!! Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:21 pm

Err okay than um.........*deep breath* OMHWTFBBQ IS THAT AHHHHHARAWRAWRAWRAWRAWRAWRAWRAWR -runs frantically away in circles-
....is that better =/
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:49 pm

much betta!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:17 pm

i still want a bunny...=/
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:15 am

okey...here u goes...

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PostSubject: Re: Love Story alternate ending   Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:28 am

YEY -pets-
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