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PostSubject: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 5:56 am

there was two people, a boy and a girl, they had never met before. she from an upper class family, he, a lowly blacksmith's son. one day the boy heard about a masquerade ball and decided to go, he planned to put on a simple mask and sneak in from the back. while at the ball the girl was sitting on a balcony high above the party, as soon as the boy entered he saw her and fell in love with her. after the ball he watched as she got into her carriage and followed it all the way home. when he did he sat in the bushes waiting to catch a glimpse of her. he waited for what seemed like hours until he saw her in the window. so he picked up a handful of pebbles and threw them at her window, when she opened them she saw him and she too fell in love. the boy was stunned by her beauty, but the the girls father came out and yelled "stay away from my daughter", and threatened the boy with a sword. the girl started crying for for father to stop. he chased the boy away from his estate. the next night when the girl was in her garden the boy sneaked passed the guards and met her there but before she could say a thing he kissed her on the lips, embracing her as he did, and whispered "we mustn't speak because if they hear us we're dead". and that is how it started every night they would meet in the gardens and embrace each other, the girl would bring a lantern as a signal that it was her. but one night the boy didn't come , the girl waited and waited but he never came, but after 6 nights she gave up, until one day she saw him on the outskirts of town, and when she did she ran to him crying, and when she got to him she just hugged him crying "save me, i've been feeling so alone without you" but then the boy keeled onto the ground, the girl didn't know what to think, until the boy pulled out a ring saying "marry me and you'll never have to feel alone, cause loving you is all i know, i convinced your dad and we wed in the spring". and they spent he rest of their lives together in eternal happiness.






So what did ya think Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 8:06 am

lol
space it out, make some paragraphs, really didnt feel like reading that o.o
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 8:33 am

Sounds like a ferrytail version of Romeo and juliet with a happier endinb =/
-actually reads walls of text-
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 6:52 pm

well actually i based it on that song Love song by Taylor Swift (best song for love story FTW!)
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:07 pm

OHHHHHH I KNEW IT SOUNDED FAMILIAR XD

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:14 pm

I've been singing that song in my head all week and now im super into Romeo & Juliet, my fav English teacher is gonna lend it to me when she gets it back off her friend
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:47 am

whose your english teacher? o.o
mine is kensley AND SHES LIKE MY FAV since davis T~T
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:42 am

I LOVE THAT SONG!!!
ITZ AWESOME!!! Very Happy Very Happy

Romeo save me I've been feeling so alone...
I keep waiting for you but you never come...
Is this in my head, I don't know what to think...
He knealt to the ground and pulled out a ring...

And said:

Marry me Juliet you'll never have to be alone...
I love you and that's all I really know...
I talked to your dad go pick out a white dress...
It's a love story baby just say YES!!

YAY!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:16 am

It was my y7 teach ms Gleason (ms Gleason ftw)

little did i know...

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles,
but my daddy said stay away from Juliet!,
and i start crying on the staris begging you please don't go

I LUV DAT SONG Very Happy Very Happy

And my english teacher for this year is Mr berrigan and Mr Wintle (Wintle ftw)
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:13 am

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M LISTENING TO THAT SONG RIGHT NOW!!! LOVE IT!!!
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:15 am

ima gonna buy and listen to it all night long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:16 am

lol @ wagner studying to be a priest XD
hes got such a calming voice, i fell asleep to it 4 times X_X
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:18 am

yes calming *coughcough latent homosexuality coughcough*
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:20 am

meh its close enough
-continues enjoying latent homosexuality-
btw my cuz drew on my hand with the magic marker DX
now im a pot smoking, fart sniffing, tree licking, gay, jew o.o
AND NOW ITS SUCKED INTO MY PALM T~T
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:27 am

OMFG LOL!
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:06 am

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 9:24 am

Ragafa wrote:
meh its close enough
-continues enjoying latent homosexuality-
btw my cuz drew on my hand with the magic marker DX
now im a pot smoking, fart sniffing, tree licking, gay, jew o.o
AND NOW ITS SUCKED INTO MY PALM T~T

Why do i get the feeling he's watched to much South Park .____.
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:04 pm

i hate south park. it was never funny. unless you thinking midgets cussing at everything and making racist remarks is funny..
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:08 pm

lol there 2nd graders not midgets ._.

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 2:21 pm

Correction 4rth graders =/
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:31 pm

really? thought they were 2nd =.=
meh, i havnt seen it in a long time anyway

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:32 pm

i watch comedy central a lot so yeaaaah......
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:36 pm

i WOULD be watching comedy central alot -dane cook FTW- but i cant cause dad cut down the cable TT^TT

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:37 pm

Jeff Dunham, Scrubs FTW?
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:55 pm

the adventures of sarah conoley? o.o
Comedy inc? o.o
stand up australia? o.o
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