Daniel And Suria

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A simple story with a meaning at the end, i told zielo and shes the only one that understands the meaning of the story, im not going to tell anyone else until the opportune moment, here it is, its called Daniel and Suria

100 years ago, two people met, one called Daniel and the Other Suria...
Daniel was a book seller, he saw Suria while she was visiting his shop.
Suria and Daniel Fell inlove with eachother at their first glance.
Daniel tried to meet with his lover, but she was blocked by her father, a strict man that only allowed men into the house if it was for his sake.
So Daniel and Suria met in a small abandoned house a few blocks away from the shop, every time they met, they made love and talked about the upcoming or past events, but suddenly, Daniel Couldnt take it any longer.
He told Suria that he was to save up all he could and take her away, to a different land, so that they may live in peace together always.
Half a year later...
Daniel had finally achieved his objective, he had finally mustered enough money to run away with Suria.
But Daniel hadnt seen his lover in some time, he was too busy working that he had forgotten to visit her regulary, he finally decided to pretend to make a work related call and find out about Suria, she had gone missing about two weeks earlier, and he was told that she was pregnant...
He began to Panic and he Ran, looking for his one and only, his life, his meaning...
nearly a month later, he got a call from a friend that Suria was found in the hospital, concieving their child.
He ran to the hospital and saw his lover, dead... She had died During conception and the baby had died with her...
Upon seeing his woman and their new baby dead, he began to die, he felt as if his skin decayed and his organs faded.
Weeks later, and after his former lover's burial he could take it anymore, he went to the grave, dug it up and in his mud covered hands he held a knife, and knife which carryed his ultimate fate, he looked at his partener and kissed her decayed face, he lay beside her and struck the knife into his chest....
But nothing had Changed, he struck again, and again, nothing was happening, he wasnt dieing, he wasnt feeling any pain for death can only happen once per life and he had felt the pain, the sadness, he was already dead, but his soul and body still tread the ground, there was no escape...

Whatcha think? i had to rush this since i had to go out with my friend, but i tried to throw the story as i made it, but yeah, tell me what you think!!!

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Cookie Flavoured, Cookie Filled Pie?

Randomness randomness?

I like platapus's (platapi?) ?

What IS the plural for platapus?

platypusses
is plural I think...

platypus singular and playpus plural

But when I say "I love platypus" it dosnt sound right. o.O

your off topic ppl
DuckFilledPlatypus

noooooo it makes sense.