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Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:11 am | |
| GET READY PEPS FOR A SUPER MEGA MULTI CHAPTER USER FRIENDLY RATED M STORY OF EPIC PROPORTIONS! Or SMMCURFRMSOP (Smmmm-curf-msop) Rated M for Sex, language and battles of mass destruction Some ideas based on bleach and naruto o-o The title Toratsume is 2 words, Tora meaning Tiger and Tsume meaning claw. TIGER CLAW! And this is a non realistic story derp. Also think anime, that will help. Note: Plot won't start till around chapter 6-7, 1 - 5 is more of a intro to characters and hints about things and what not. Chapter 1 - Bored - Spoiler:
Jando laid there bored out of this mind, channel surfing like a pro, it was Friday night and once again he was bored, lonely and fucking nothing to do. For the first time, homework was done, he bet ff13 last night and the computer was geting repaired so all he had to was watch boring ass Friday night TV and there was hardly anything on. Jando looked at the clock.
9:23pm
"I guess its alright to just go to bed" Jando got up, turned the TV off and went to the Kitchen to put his dishes into the sink. It couldn't believe how bored someone could get. He tried to call his friends up but he couldn't get through. "fuck, they went out and didn't tell me, what great friends." Jando was about to turn the lights off till...
knock knock knock
The door, killing the silence the filled his house, Jando stood there, who the fuck could be at his door, wanting him at this time of night. It confused Jando but without hesitation he went to the door not bothering to look through the hole to find out who it is. His face only showing boredom and didn't change when he opened it.
"Hey Sarah"
Sarah looked up at Jando, cringing at how bored his voice was. Their eyes met and Sarah forgot what she was going to say.
'Sarah?" Jando looked at the red haired girl with now confusion, what girl came up to his house -how did she even get my address- knock on the door then say nothing?
Jando checked out Sarah as he waited for an answer, her hair was tied up into two ponytails and she was wearing a light pink 2 peice dress. Jando emitted to himself that she did look good and the perfume she was wearing just topped it off. Jando's confused looked change to boredom once agian, he couldn't take this awkward silence..he took action.
"Would you like to come in?" Sarah nodded her head and went into Jando's apartment, Jando took off to the kitchen, and Sarah followed still not saying a thing. Jando comtemplated why she was here, the only reason girls even bothered to talk to him was because they wanted someone to order around and use, and Jando -learning that hard way- realized this and basically turned down any girl who had asked him out.
Sarah on the other hand was different, they were friends, they talked to each other and heck, they went out occasionally but it was never serious, they went on dates without a kiss goodbye, to Jando, Sarah was just a female friend, he never once thought her as a girlfriend and he could feel that his friendship with her was getting strong to make Sarah a best friend.
Once Jando got to the kitchen he looked at Sarah again, analysing her body language, she was nervous. Jando needed an ice breaker, to cut this fucking gay ass silence. Why did he turn the TV off.... Jando spoke "Would you like something to drink or eat?" Sarah only shook her head.
Jando took out some milk from the fridge, then some coffee and finally some sugar, placing them all on the island in his kitchen. He might aswell make another batch of ice coffee, it was much cheaper then buying bottles of it. He took out his blender and start to add the ingrediants for this concoction. Sarah was still lookin on the ground.
As Jando poured the milk, he thought about Sarah, and why she was here. He had met her mother Sasha, she was cool, fun to be around and didn't embarass her like his Dad did when he met Sarah, he imediately went on about using protection, and to go at it like Rabbits. This confused Jando so much and embarased him, he was glad his red face didn't show and was able to confort the bright red Sarah.
Why did his Dad want more grandchildren? He already had 2, thanks to his sister, and his other sister still hasn't had any. Maybe it was because his Dad knew that he was still a boy, still not taken the plunge to man-hood heck, Jando didn't really care about the plunge to man-hood, he soon just gave up after, a nagging Dad isn't the best way to lose your virginity. And to be honest he was waiting for the right girl.
"Hey Jando" Jando's ,who was in a trance like state, was broken out of it. He looked up at Sarah who someone felt the courage to look at him. In all his life, Sarah never acted like this. What the hell is going on with her?
"I'm sorry" Sarah spoke quietly, like afraid something terrible has happened. Jando could only think why the fuck was she sorry? he had to ask. "Huh, for what?"
"For ruining your night, here I am in a mess -what mess? Jando thought- and you've kindly just let me in. I feel I'm intruding..I should go" Jando pressed the button and the blender when psycho as it mixed the contents together. Jando was glad there was noise again, silence fell agian after Sarah spoke, and he didn't want the silence to start again. After 5 seconds of the blender going he stopped it, to reply to Sarah.
"Ruining my night? pfft, from the looks of it you've had a better night then I have, I was about to go to bed" Sarah could detect hints of humour as he spoke, she felt relieved, she was glad that she could rely on Jando as a supporting block, without him she probably lose herself to whatever it was that trying to make her lose. She started at Jando, as he pour two glasses of coffee.
"Here" Jando passed the glass to Sarah, Sarah who had already refused a drink, relucted accepted the glass and took a sip, she felt the caffeine wake her up a bit and it took her out of the slight depression she was in. "So, is everything ok?" Jando asked Sarah, concern filling his voice as he spoke. Sarah's gaze went back the most interesting spot on the floor. Was everything ok..Nothing was ok.
Sarah's mind filled with words, she just wanted to say what was wrong but just couldn’t bring herself to just say it. Her night had been horrible so far, she just wanted comfort and Jando being ever so stubborn didn't give it to her. So Sarah did the only thing she knew to get said comfort. Tears started to trickle down Sarah's ever so soft skin, passing her cheeks and ending there journey by falling off and landing near the spot Sarah had been staring at.
Jando's concern for her increased 10 fold, Dam why did she have to go cry, he knew something was wrong and he knew that he had to comfort her, it was like instinct. Jando took Sarah's finished glass and put it in the sink with his and went over to her, Jando noticed as he got closer how her body longed to bed held. What the fuck made her like this.
He stood infront of her, she only coming up to his chin, Jando wrapped his arms around her making Sarah look up, which made Jando kiss her ever so lightly on her forehead and notice that this wasn't the first time she cried tonight. They stood there in silence, as the night ticked away.
What felt like 5 hours, happened in 5 minutes, more tears fell from Sarah as she buried her face into Jando's chest. Jando slowly let go and led her to his bedroom, he knew that she should lie down.
Sarah, who was a wreck, only followed, followed without thought as she thought over the night that made her like this. How could she explain this to Jando. She knew that he wanted to know, and only holding off out of concern. It was up to her to. Before she knew it, Sarah was in the warmness of Jando's king size bed, she felt Jando lie next to her, closer then he normally would.
She felt at peace as she started at the cieling. Feeling Jando's hand through her hair, made her crying stop, she was loving this. She felt like she could open up now and Jando who waited there eagerly to find out what was wrong immediately regreted it.
"He..he..touch me" Sarah's voice cracked as those 3 words were probably the second most hardest set of words to say to another man for the first time. Jando's eyes lit up in shock, he knew that Sarah was seeing someone, he was a good guy, but once he got drunk you couldn't tell how this guy was good.
He had gotten into a brawl with him one night and that was when he wanted Sarah to stop seeing him but that didn't stop her, his sober kindness was the kindness Sarah was missing in her life. Jando knew that and hated himself for not being able to give that kindness instead. "He..was drunk, he said it was ok that he was using protection" Sarah could feel tears form again and they ran down her face as she continued. "I said no, but he wouldn't take no for answer, he picked me up and through me to the bed. Where he physically held me down." Tears ran down Sarah's face like a river, having to remember about this was torture for her.
"I tried to yell out for help, but my voice was muffled as he kissed me. He tried to force his tongue into me but I was rejecting it, he was about to hit me till Dan came, Adrian was with him and he forced him off me. If it hadn't been for them then my innocence would have been gone. I was so greatful for them, they had to knock him out before they helped me. They walked me home from the party" Sarah's voice trailed off. "but I couldn't stand being home alone, so I ran here." Sarah turned her head and met Jando's eyes. she had to swallow, to prepare herself at what he was gonna say. She was shocked when he did.
"silly girl, I told you to not see him"
Sarah began to cry, and pulled Jando closer to her. Jando layed there with here, hugging her as the poor girl weeped. They soon both fell asleep in each other arms, for the first time.
Chapter 2: There's a first for everything - Spoiler:
Jando woke up, he look at the clock that was staring at him, reading 1:37am. Fuck why did he have to wake up, he was having the best dream ever. Jando stretched and immediately felt something wrong, Sarah wasn't in the bed. He got up, wanting to find where the girl who fell asleep in his arms went, and how she escaped his grasp without waking him.
He heard crying, coming from the toilet. He saw the light seeping out of the cracks of the door, which got brighter has he traversed the dark hallway. The crying grew louder. Jando got to the door, he didn’t know what to do..Should he knock first? Or say something? Instead of doing either of them, he put his ear to the door and listened.
Sarah was a mess, she just couldn’t forget what happened last night, the way he touched her, she should of hated it, she was about to get raped but the problem was that she liked how he touched her. Whatever he was going to do she was going to enjoy it. And she hates herself for it and is why she wanted him to stop. Now she’s here, crying in her friend’s toilet. She felt like shit, however she did enjoy falling asleep cuddled to Jando. For a split second all the bad escapes her then comes rushes back in as she remembers why she’s here. Sarah cries louder.
Jando feels uncomfortable, never has he experienced anything like this. He didn’t know how to act around girls who just broke down crying, it just made him nervous. All he knew what to do is hug them and comfort saying everything is going to be ok even though there not. But what the fuck can he do here in this situation. well here goes nothing Jando sighed and spoke.
“Sarah, you ok?”
Sarah looked up in shock, frightened a bit as Jando spoke. What was only a split second decision Sarah acted before she could think. She stood up and opened the door to see Jando standing there, her heart sank, if she spoke now it would be only gibberish, she stepped closer to Jando until she was directly in front of him, throwing her arms around his neck and pulled him down, she stood on her toes and there they shared a kiss.
At first it was only lips, it took Jando well over 10 seconds to realise what was happening, his eyes wide open staring at Sarah’s closed eyes. He wasn’t thinking straight, but the moment he did he knew that he need to savour this feeling, the feeling of Sarah’s lips against his. Jando’s instincts took over.
Sarah was enjoying the kiss then more than anything in her life, the feel of his lips against hers, she loved every bit of it. However doubt filled her mind when she realized he wasn’t kissing back. Sarah didn’t know what to do, if she pulled back it was only lead to an awkward situation till…
Jando poked his tongue out, easily opening Sarah’s mouth, the tongue adventured into the unknown world of the female mouth searching for something, the tongue shrilled in happiness when it found it. Sarah’s tongue, instinctive went to the intruder, the tongues met, which started the almighty battle of who could touch the most. They started out slow, till they furiously when all out. Sarah couldn’t think, her mind was blank as she enjoyed the kiss, how she wished that it wouldn’t end. It somehow made all her troubles disappear. Sarah let out a quiet moan as Jando’s tongue continued to battle her own.
Jando was becoming excited, he never knew that kissing like this would get me so aroused, he never it could feel this good just to kiss someone, even though he wasn’t thinking straight his tongue somehow knew what to do, he opened his eyes –When did I close them?- to see Sarah, she was enjoying this as much as he was. How far was this going to go…Jando had to decide, to leave it here or take it further. He decided on the latter and with that he pulled away from Sarah’s mouth, he immediately want to go back but had other plans.
Jando moved his mouth and started to move down Sarah’s face, kissing her every time. He got to her neck, and felt a wave of excitement come across him when Sarah let out a moan, her hands went to his hair and nails dug in deep, oh god she was excited.
Jando wanted more, but he wasn’t the time nor place to do so, so with that he stopped and picked Sarah up over his shoulders, Sarah yelped and Jando excitedly walked to his bedroom. He placed Sarah down gently on his bed, their eyes met, Jando got onto the bed Sarah lying under him, and with they kissed again, their tongues reuniting and battling once again.
This time it was different, now that they were lying down their hands could explore, Sarah’s hands started at Jando’s hair and moved down pass his neck to explore his back. Jando used one hand to support himself and let the other travel down Sarah’s body, going over her left breast then over stomach then back to her breast. Jando could feel Sarah tensing, moaning whenever she could get the chance to as they kissed.
Jando had to taste her neck again, so he stopped the intense kissing and travelled once again down to Sarah’s neck, feeling her soft skin through every kiss. Jando could think now, and realized his hand was on Sarah’s breast, he liked the feel. They weren’t too big and at the same time not to small either, they were just perfect. Jando played with Sarah’s breast, touching it then using his fingers to massage the nipple. It was erected, Jando knew that this was getting her excited, and it was getting him even more excited know that.
He moved down her neck and to her other breast; Jando took both arms off their current position, now supporting himself with his legs and back, slowly pulled Sarah’s top down to reveal her breasts. Jando’s eyes widen with ecstasy at this site. Phenomenal . Jando took both hands and groped each breasts and took his mouth to her left breast and start to lick it wildly.
Sarah could only moan, this feeling was like no other, it was what she wanted to feel when he tried to rape her,however it felt right with Jando. The moment that Jando started to work on her breasts is when Sarah lost all control. She arched her back and dug her nails into Jando’s back, if it wasn’t for his shirt then blood would of appeared.
Jando soon got bored groping her breasts, he wanted more and he knew where to get it. He was nervous, what he was about to do he had never done before, heck all that had happened in 10 minutes –which has felt like 10 hours- he had never done before. Jando wished his instincts would just kick in but they didn’t, he was stuck there licking Sarah’s left nipple and his hands massaging both breasts.
He went for it, Jando stopped working on Sarah’s breasts and moved down, kissing her all the way down to her skirt. It was short, only coming to the top of her knees. He pulled them down, he was nervous; the biggest wave of excited hit him when he saw her panties, her pink panties, wet.
Without thinking, Jando dived for them, his tongue, it knew what to do, it knew what it wanted. Jando’s tongue touched the fabric of Sarah’s panties, his tongue becoming soaked with Sarah’s juices, he immediately wanted more and pushed in further touching for the first time in his life, Sarah’s womanhood. Fuck, he loved it. And he loved Sarah’s reaction to it as she moaned louder and louder.
He wanted to see, wanted to see her. Jando pulled her panties off, she was shaven, however Jando didn’t think about that and just drove straight down and went wild, his tongue eating her up like she was chocolate. She tasted so fucking good. Jando now wanted to feel what it felt like to be inside her, he had already gone this far, won’t hurt if he went further. He could tell that Sarah was enjoying this as much as he was, heck, maybe even more.
“Jando!”
Sarah yelled in pleasure, as she came. Jando immediately started to drink her, he just gave made her come. Fuck, this was intense. Any intentions of stoping soon vanished to what Sarah said next.
“Fuck, Jando I want you!”
Jando’s eyes widened, fuck he wanted her to. And he was going to give it to her. He stood up, out of the bed and removed his pants, taking his boxes with them, revealing his erection in the process, this made Sarah gasp at the site, it was so big, like she could compare though. She laid there, waiting, all she could think of were fuck, shit and just thinking about it made her twice as wet as before. Her body tensed up as he approached her, his hand on his erection guiding it towards bliss.
“I’ll go slow”
Jando somehow spoke, he didn’t know if Sarah was still a virgin, and fuck if he went fast he probably would of came 2 minutes ago. If it wasn’t for all those masturbation session he probably would or ruined this whole experience in around 10 seconds. His member touched the outside of Sarah, she moaned
“Yes! I want it inside me”
Sarah gasped in pain, as Jando entered, moving her hands away from her exposed breast and on to Jando’s back, digging in deep. Jando’s blanked out for a second as he entered her, and fuck it felt good. He wanted to come the and there but knew he needed to make Sarah orgasm again. Jando moved back, then begun a series of slow thrusts, he could tell that Sarah was in pain by how much pressure she was applying to her hands as she held on his back. He knew that blood must be trickling by now.
“Go faster!”
Jando obediently begun to thrust faster, and faster, he couldn’t think straight, he had to continue to repeat what he was doing over and over again or the pleasure would be too much. Sarah’s moaning intensified which didn’t help Jando keeping it in. Her moaning increased to the point where Jando could hold longer anymore.
“Faster!”
Jando went faster, fuck this felt so good he thought to himself. He could feel Sarah nearly climax and so was he, he wanted to come inside her but he knew he couldn’t. But the moment he retreated Sarah’s leg latched around him, pulling him right in.
“YESSSSSSSS”
Sarah and Jando climaxed together, it fucking felt exhilarating. Jando was exhausted, he fell to the side, he was now lying on his back and Sarah was on top of him. They were hot, sweaty but most of all felt fantastic. There breathing was heavy and took a good 5 minutes for them to calm down.
“That was amazing Jando” Sarah spoke first, warping her arms around Jando while snuggling into his chest to get comfortable, closing her eyes once she did. Jando couldn’t speak, his eyes were already closed and for the second time, he fell asleep with Sarah.
CHAPTER 3: Super dream, super super dream, super - Spoiler:
“ GO LEFT!, GO LEFT!” A guy screamed, a grenade exploded. Bits of people flew in all directions and all Jando could do was shake in fear, he didn’t know how he got here and didn't know what the hell he was fighting. Jando poked his head of the grenade made bunker, in a matter of 0.5 seconds, his head was back in, tucked and hidden from the enemy sight. Jando caught a glimpse of the enemy proceeding, if he didn’t do anything now he was going to do die.
Die a hero, or live long to become the villain.
Harvey Dents voice probed Jando’s mind to that scene in the Dark Knight. Why? He had no idea, if he stayed here, he would die, if he attacked and ambush them, he would die…WHY WAS HE THINKING ABOUT THE DARK KNIGHT! Jando built of courage, he was going to do this, he was prepared, he wrapped his arms around the gun he was holding, he had 100% ammo and 3 grenades. Jando quickly attached the grenade launcher extension piece to the gun, he had a plan and if he executed it correctly he would die a hero…stupid quote.
Jando was ready, he inhaled and held it. Jando jumped out of the ditch and before the enemy could react, the 3 grenades were already launched and were embedded into 3 people before they exploded. Jando began to run, shooting anything, everything he saw. Fuck he hated war, he just wanted to be home with his wife and 3 kids. Jando lost this wonderful thought when the enemy tackled him, his eyes widen in fear as he saw the face of his enemy, a Toratsume. A alien race that was a fusion of humans and tigers, they were fast, deadly, smart and there hand-to-face combat was best in the universe.
Jando stared as the Toratsume raised its paw to deliver the killer blow, fuck, he didn’t want to die. He was so scared that he start to laugh, something was tickling his feet, was there something on this planet that do that sort of thing? The Toratsume had no emotion as its fist moved, Jando saw it in slow motion, he wanted his life to flash before his eyes but it didn’t. All he could do was laugh.
The sound of pillow-hitting-face echoed through Jando’s room, Jando immediately sat up in a fright, he was sweating, panting and most of all confused. His eyes shifted to look at Sarah was straddled across his legs, she was holding a pillow, all Jando could do is stare at her naked body. Sarah began to laugh.
What. The. Fuck.
Was all Jando could think at the moment, it didn’t take long for all what happened last night –early this morning- to rush back. He remembered, Sarah coming to his apartment, them sharing a kiss, them having sex and most importantly Sarah not allowing him to back out before he climaxed.
Sarah could only laugh, from him laughing when she tickled his toes and to the reaction he got when her pillow met his face. Jando looked so stupid at the moment, he was staring at her body but it didn’t like he was looking at the same time. Sarah immediately knew what Jando was doing, thinking. “Jando!” Sarah slashed the pillow again across his face, Jando took it head on and even though It didn’t hurt his hand distinctly went to his left check and started to move in circles. “Sarah, what is your problem!” Jando yelled out in annoyance. “I’m sorry, but you looked so stupid that I couldn’t resist” Sarah said with complete innocence.
Jando lost track of thought and notice Sarah naked, straddled over his legs. Sarah began to feel a new part of Jando’s body touch her . She smirked and started to move down Jando legs till her head was under his member.
“Someone has morning wood” Sarah said as her hands got closer to Jando’s manhood. “S-Sarah, we need to ta-“but before Jando could finish, Sarah’s hands were warped around his member and her tongue was tickling the tip. Jando forgot what he was going to say and let a moan.
Sarah’s tongue retreated only to be followed by her mouth taking the appendage in, it was then the tongue came back and started to lick wildly. All Jando could do was take it, he started to breath heavily, his eyes were closed, Jando went to open them to see Sarah looking back at him as her head went up and down. It was too much, Jando closed his eyes again “S-S-Sarah, I’m going to c-“. Before Jando could finish, Sarah had changed the direction of her tongue and Jando climaxed in her mouth. Sarah took it all swallowed it.
Jando was exhausted, he did nothing and was exhausted, he fell back and his upper body collided with the bed. Sarah crawled towards his face, their eyes meet. Sarah was smiling and Jando was still panting. “S-S-Sarah, th-th-that was amazing” Jando recovered his breath. “Well I felt bad, you made me cum twice last night” Jando was surprised, never in his time that he knew Sarah has she spoken or acted like this.
“Last night was amazing, I never pictured my first time to be so good” Sarah’s head was no resting on Jando’s chest; she could feel Jando’s heartbeat as she reminisced about last night. “LAST NIGHT!” Jando broke out in a shock as he remembered what he was going to say. “I-I ejaculated in you, you’re gonna become pregnant” Jando’s face filled with worry and Sarah broke out in laughter. “Silly Jando, didn’t I tell you last week that I was on the pill?” Jando’s faced changed from worried to confused. “The pill?” Jando asked, “yes, the pill, you were at my house remember and my Mum was enforcing me to take it.” Jando instantly remembered that day and how Sarah’s Mum was all defensive that she doesn’t want grandkids till her daughter was ready, he laughed at how red Sarah was getting, he regretted it soon after when he received a slap from Sarah.
“Oh thank God” Jando said in a sigh of relief, Sarah continued to laugh and warped her hands around Jando. He enjoyed this, being naked, lying her with Sarah, he could just dose off.
“WHERE HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Jando’s Dad roared out which made Jando roll over and fall off the bed, Sarah followed. “Holy shit, My dad’s home, quick you have to hide!” Jando was worried, the amount of shit he was going to get from his father if he caught them was going to be unbearable. MY SON HAS BECOME A MAN! I’M GETTING A GRANDCHILD IN A NINE MONTHS! YOU TWO ARE GETTING MARRIED TODAY! Jando was dreading, he heard the footsteps one by one as his father stepped closer to his room, the door was wide open…”Quick, get into the closet” Jando commanded in a whisper to Sarah as he got up, trying to pull her up with him. “Why don’t you go in the closet, I’m staying here” Sarah lashed out at Jando. “fine” Jando let go of Sarah, “onto plan B then”. As fast as he could, Jando went for his boxers and put them on and then threw the dooner on to Sarah, he heard her yelp as it landed on it, “stay there and be quiet” Jando whispered to be replied with nothing.
“JANDO! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” Jando jumped in a fright and turned around to see his Dad with a finger pointed at him. “IT’S 7 AM AND YOUR STILL NOT DRESSED!!!”. Wait..only 7am? What was he doing up at 7am,oh right Sarah, wait what was his dad home at 7am.
“Why are you in my room!” Jando retorted and walked over to his dad to push him out, thank god for Sarah being quiet. “THIS IS MY ROOM. NOT YOUR ROOM, MY HOUSE, MY ROOM” It escaped Jando’s mind why his father continued to talk so loud but it didn’t take long for Jando’s door to be closed and his father at the door, fake crying and yelling “OH WHAT A CRUEL WORLD IT IS TO BE LOCKED OUT OF MY ROOM”. Jando kept his hands on the door till he heard his father walk away and saying “Breakfast will be ready in 10mintues”. “Honestly, how the hell is my father friends with your Mother?”. Sarah tore the dooner off and stood up. “Heh, I’m just glad that you’re not as loud as your father”. Jando was about to say something but only left his mouth hanging as he saw Sarah naked still walking towards him. Sarah was smirking as she reached Jando and went for a kiss, Jando kissed backed. When the kiss ended, Sarah walked off to find her clothes, “Nah, you just can’t hear me because you’re louder”. Sarah stopped what she was doing, she knew he was referring to last night, dam he got her there. Instead of thinking of a comeback, Sarah bent down to pick up her thrown-panties and gave a beast of view to Jando. Silence filled the room as Sarah slid on her panties, then her skirt, bra, and top.
knock knock
“Jando get your butt down here and help with breakfast” Anna –Jando’s younger sister- was at the door. “I ain’t doing all the work”
“Bah!” Jando replied, he hated doing breakfast, ever since Mum died and his Sister moved out, his younger sister did all cooking and every single time he got stuck in either doing something boring, tedious and stupid. Like dishes….fuck he hated dishes. Anna opened the door to see her half naked brother and a girl in pink, Jando raged and in a matter 2 seconds she was out and received a death glare from Jando. Anna walked back to the kitchen, in both embarrassment and amusement; oh she was going to have fun.
“So is your brother coming to help?” Anna’s Dad said while drinking his coffee. “Nah” Anna replied “Why?” Anna’s Dad grew curious, and took another sip of coffee “He has this girl in there with him” Anna said and shrieked when all the coffee in her Dad’s mouth exploded out. “I DON’T BELIEVE YOU!” Before Anna could say anything, her father was running towards his son’s bedroom. Anna then looked at the mess in front of her. “I ain’t cleaning that up”.
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“GUH! My sister saw you” Jando had his hands over his face. “So what?” Sarah replied, standing casually watching a half naked Jando coil in whatever it was he was coiling about. “So…” Jando removed his hands and turned to face Sarah, “Now she has power over me”. “So what?” Sarah said again. “If my Dad finds out what happens, all hell will break loose” Jando then relised that he still only had his boxers on, “And she saw me in only my boxers, this situation has from bad to worse.” “So your saying what we had was bad?” Sarah moved towards Jando, she was now annoyed. Jando had made the wrong move. “No no no, I don’t mean that being bad.” “Just admit it Jando, you don’t love me!” Sarah eyes began to fill up with water, and her face was being screwed up.
SMASH!
Jando’s door was kicked open by his father, he made his own assumption on the spot on what was happening. “MY SON IS A RAPIST!” Jando was in shock, this is probably be the worst situation in the whole world, a girl crying and a Dad calling you a rapist. Yes things went from bad to worse…Jando wished he was back in his dream, what was that thing he was killing? Tor…torat…. Jando’s Dad went to hug/protect Sarah, Sarah took the bear hug in acceptance. “POOR SARAH, WHAT DID MY BOY DO TO YOU!” Sarah continued to cry on Jando’s Dad shoulder. “H-he-he-he” Jando was looking at Sarah’s, and he knew was mucking around, dam her. Sarah continued to sob. “Touched me.” Jando’s father gasped and put the girl down from the bear hug to look at Jando, it was death glare vs death glare. Jando in boxer shorts, Sarah poorly dress, Sarah’s hair frizzled, it all made since.
Anna popped her head into the room and saw her brother –still in boxers- and her Dad in a ultimate battle of death glare, she got Sarah’s attention and unnoticed by the men, left the room. Once the two girls got to the kitchen, the awkward silence that was in Jando’s room, was now in the kitchen. Sarah didn’t know what to say, thank you maybe? Yes I’ll go with that. “Thanks”. “No Problem, death Stare showdowns can last a while” “Really?” “yep, last one went for 3 hours”. 3 hours…far out was all Sarah could think off.
“So, you and my brother?” Sarah was shocked the question that was asked, her facial expression told it all for Anna, “Hmmp, looks like I win $100” Anna smiled as she walked over to the stove. “What?” Sarah was confused. “Oh, I made a bet with my sister if you and Jando would ever get together, she bet against it and I bet for it, $100 for the winner”. Anna said while cracking open some eggs on putting them on the frypan.
“Wh-Where not together” Was the only thing that came to Sarah’s mind. “Sure-sure” Anna said mockingly, Sarah wasn’t good at holding her position in a disagreement. “What me and my father saw last night just proves it”. “WHAT!” Sarah got fright, did they see them in bed? Hear them? Watch them? So many questions. “Oh relax, we only saw you and Jando sleeping at around 10pm. Dad thought it would be best if we left and stayed over at my sisters place, and that is where I made the bet!” Anna was now gloating. Sarah felt a sigh of relief sweep over her, till she heard the words; I’M GOING TO BE A GRANDFATHER! Jando was right, all hell was about to be unleashed, fuck.
CHAPTER 4: Dinner with friends - Spoiler:
Jando sighed as the hot water rained downed upon him, he couldn’t bare going into the kitchen with half his family and Sarah out there. Showering was probably the best way to just escape, even if it was for a little while. Jando began to reminience on what mess he has gotten himself into. He’s not in any trouble, well not yet, there’s still Sarah’s mum. But what’s the worst that she could do? Not like he got Sarah pregnant or anything. Furthermore, how is his relationship going to be now with Sarah? There friendship could be in jeopardy.
This was not good. With Exams around the corner and now all this shit, far out. He needed to see one of those school councillors. And say what? Yea, hi, I just had sex with a close friend and now exams are coming up soon. What the hell do I do? Bah, this is all too much. This was some stress I could do without.
-LOUD KNOCK, LOUD KNOCK-
“WHAT!” Jando yelled
“BREAKFAST IS READY MA BOI!” – Jando’s father matched his son’s yell.
“Bah” Jando replied in annoyance, he didn’t want to get, he didn’t want to judged, and worse of all Sarah is most likely gonna continue her teasing, a trait that he wish she lose. Why couldn’t she go back to that shy, quiet nature of hers from last night. He knows that she only does that when she’s scared. Oh well, looks like he will just need to grow some balls and do this. It might not be as worse as he’s picturing it to be.
Jando got out shower, his body already shivering and wanting the warmth it once had back. He reached for the towel and quickly dried himself off, he made a mad dash to his bedroom slamming the door behind him. I need to get a lock for this door, knowing dad, he will probably just break my door down… Jando walked over to his closet to look for something to wear, he didn’t like it how his room already smelt like Sarah, the smell just made him want Sarah more. Damn her teasing.
Jando exited his room, clothed in a casual white shirt and some blue pants. He tried to put his best bored expression he could and casually walked into the kitchen. Jando got to the kitchen, hearing his sister and Dad having a conversation with Sarah, on what though, he did not know….yet. He eyed his bacon and eggs on the table and a glass of ice cold orange juice waiting for him. Great, no side trips.
“FINALLY, I WAS ABOUT TO EAT YA FOOD!” Father roared out, seriously this early aswell?
“You have clean up duty, and you have to mop up the coffee Dad spat all over there” Anna said while nomming some toast. “Bah, fine” Jando frowned and sat down, not daring to make eye contact with anyone. He grabbed his fork and started to eat his breakfast, he could see his Father nearly bursting with something to say. Anna was still eating her toast and Sarah, well she was staring at his father.
“Fine, spit it out” – Jando sighed as he lean back into the chair and looked at everyone. “So I was thinking Claire if it was a girl, or Tim if it’s a boy!” From what his father said made Jando feel multiple feelings, anger was definitely one of them, he saw Sarah blushing and Anna not caring at all. Must remain calm. “She’s on the pill Dad, quit being in fantasy land” Jando said bluntly. “HA! I told you not to get your hopes up old man when you didn’t see a condom” Anna stood up and mocked her father. Sarah blushed more and Jando become even more infuriated. Must remain calm.
“BUWAHAHAHAHAHA” Jando’s father cried. “IT’S NOT FAIR!”, “Naw, come on Dad, Jandy is finally a man, you should be happy” Anna was having a field day, seriously why couldn’t she just go back to her “not caring”. “But I was so sure! I know!” Jando father stood up from his chair.
“YOU TWO” He pointed and Jando and Sarah. “GO BACK IN THE BEDROOM AND MAKE ME SOME GRANDCHILDREN!” That was it. Jando couldn’t take it anymore, he stood up and punched his dad in jaw “SHUT UP!” “STOP WITH THE YELLING AT 8AM” Sarah started to giggle. “Jando, know you’ve done it” Anna left her seat and went to her father “Daddy-dearest, are you alright” She said in a cutesy tone. “I be fine darling” He replied, and in a flash he got up and kneed Jando in the stomach however Jando was quick to react and was able to lessen the impact. “Jando!” Sarah yelped and went to his aide. “You’re still too weak my son” Jando groaned on the floor. “Are you alright” Sarah asked. “Yea, I’ll be alright” Jando mumbled, he moved his hand to his head to try and stop the pain. “
CHAPTER 5: I hate monday's - Spoiler:
O_O
CHAPTER 6: Fight the power YA! - Spoiler:
CHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAA
CHAPTER 7: T.R.I.O THE POWER CHAPTER 8: XIXON? WHAT? CHAPTER 9: THE XIXECUTIONER CHAPTER 10: DRAGON POWER, MAKE UP! CHAPTER 11: THE SHADOW MAN! CHAPTER 12: NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH CHAPTER 13: WHEN BROTHERS COLLIDE CHAPTER 14: ULTIMATE CHAPTER 15: THE WINGED CRUSADER CHAPTER 16: THE COVENANT CHAPTER 17:
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| | | Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:22 am | |
| Interesting Dream Jndow o-o
I would write one I had but its REALLY LONG (yeah longest I can rmmbr x-x) and Im ot made of Writters wood too x3
GO FINISH IT NAOH! O:< | |
| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:51 am | |
| o-o 3.6k words and 11 pages long. THATS HOW LONG IT TOOK ME TO WRITE A LEMON! Fuck! Oh and also this is like 10% of the dream, I'm only really stealing the characters from it. WHACKED OUT DREAMS FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!
I have no idea when I will right ch3 | |
| | | Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:49 pm | |
| o-o'' -wats for Jndow to finish it x3- | |
| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:01 pm | |
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| | | Ragafa Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3967 Age : 31 Location : Australia Registration date : 2008-08-23
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:35 pm | |
| the entire time I was reading that, I'm sorry jando but I had to laugh. Best hentai ever. Girls don't actually like groping too much, but in hentais they do 9/10 for the best hentai ever | |
| | | Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:47 pm | |
| - Ragafa wrote:
- the entire time I was reading that, I'm sorry jando but I had to laugh.
Best hentai ever. Girls don't actually like groping too much, but in hentais they do 9/10 for the best hentai ever As much as I hate telling u: DAM U PERVERT! O:< This time I won't do it x-x (FORGIVE ME GOD! D:) I kinda agree with Kish x-x nothing else said................ | |
| | | Ragafa Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3967 Age : 31 Location : Australia Registration date : 2008-08-23
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 8:35 pm | |
| but I don't watch hentai for sexual entertainment, I watch it with friends after Helen gave me the idea, we laugh at how stupid it is D: | |
| | | Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:53 pm | |
| Then I agree more with yah =P | |
| | | blaze7734 Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 4529 Age : 32 Location : New Jersy Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:48 pm | |
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| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:37 pm | |
| Sorry, been reading to much Lemon. Mainly bleach lemon to...Fuck there are some good Lemon writers out there, and the out of 5 of the Bleach Lemons I've read only 2 of them were written by guys.
Meh, Girls write way better lemons.
I just worked for 6 hours thinking about the next couple of chapters.
NOW TIME TO FIRE MA LAZORS AND CONTINUE THIS STORY! | |
| | | Zielo Cookie Monster
Number of posts : 6603 Age : 29 Location : Louisiana Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:57 pm | |
| Lol Jando... were you having a wet dream or something?!
And yeah girls wouldnt normally cum just by groping in that way.. and you wouldnt really be able to tell if they were wet just by looking at their underwear, unless they came or peed themselves or something... but yeah, I agree, its good for a hentai. | |
| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:06 am | |
| HENTAIIIIIIIIII !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
TRANSFORMATIUON!!!!!!!!!!
:3 ;3 :3
Nah, it was just a series of seriously random hot dreams that alway made me wake with morning wood and disappointed. It never went past 2nd base in these dreams. So now I'm taken what 10% of it and making a story out of it. Changing a few things around aswell cause ofc since the dream made me out that I was like 26 or something and 2 of the girls (one being Sarah in this story) were my roommates. More like fuck buddies but without the fuck. Some got really messed up aswell. Like literary fucked. up | |
| | | Ragafa Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3967 Age : 31 Location : Australia Registration date : 2008-08-23
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 1:03 am | |
| I don't think we want to know your wet dreams dude... This is what happens when you don't have sex but really really want it, you start believing your imagination D: | |
| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:49 am | |
| BAH! THIS LEMON IS TO SOUR!
i dont even like lemon. Meh. -gives up mainly due to Kish's negativity- | |
| | | Ragafa Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3967 Age : 31 Location : Australia Registration date : 2008-08-23
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:14 am | |
| Not negativity, disgustedness. I would have enjoyed it more if you didn't tell me they were a wet dream where you got morning wood... I don't want that picture in my head thanks. | |
| | | Zielo Cookie Monster
Number of posts : 6603 Age : 29 Location : Louisiana Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:32 am | |
| To be honest the only reason why I read it was because I thought it had something to do with actual lemons, as in the fruit | |
| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:58 am | |
| No wet dreams, just wood. Hmm...I might give this another go. I want to write lemon, a new one. Maybe....it won't be based on anything you guys no about. | |
| | | Bot20O Soggy Cookie
Number of posts : 436 Registration date : 2008-08-22
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 1:23 pm | |
| I never knew Janda was THIS horny O_O........ Nice story though LOL | |
| | | blaze7734 Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 4529 Age : 32 Location : New Jersy Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:38 pm | |
| Neither did i Alex neither did i o___o;
Its getting to the point wheres its getting a tad disturbing e_e; | |
| | | Shen Cookie Monster
Number of posts : 2976 Age : 29 Location : Georgia Registration date : 2008-08-22
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:43 pm | |
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| | | Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:14 pm | |
| - blaze7734 wrote:
- Neither did i Alex neither did i
o___o;
Its getting to the point wheres its getting a tad disturbing e_e; Alek Agrees with Larz too..... mhmmm | |
| | | blaze7734 Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 4529 Age : 32 Location : New Jersy Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| I ment THAT alex but w/e <_< | |
| | | Bot20O Soggy Cookie
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| Subject: Re: Toratsume Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:46 pm | |
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| | | Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: Toratsume Mon May 10, 2010 3:45 am | |
| o-o I just read this and loved it. Loved it in the sense of the style of writing >.> Anyway, I've just written half of ch 3 and ima post it when I'm finished. | |
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