Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: New Idea for a story. Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:46 am | |
| ~WARNING~ The following text hasn't been revised and has many grammar and spelling mistakes. - Spoiler:
basically humans are made up of 3 spirits
Angel ~ Good judgement Reaper ~ Bad judgement Soul ~ Your say
Angel's and Reapers influence your say to do what you think is right or wrong. But sometimes when they feel a moment of complete weakness and have the right motive a Angel of Reaper will take over your soul and have complete control over you. There are two ways in getting full control back.
1. The Spirit decides to leave you. 2. You fight back and with force, make the spirit leave you.
Once one of the spirits is gone you will feel unbalanced and a need to feel completed again. You become Undon's when you only have one spirit with you. Angel and Reapers serve 2 purposes.
1. To give you good or bad advice to ultimately decide your actions. 2. To make sure your bodies limiters are set to a normal and equal state.
When a spirit leaves you your limiters break thus allowing you to perform god like things when mastered, however, only those who force their spirit out of them are able to master this ability.
There are no ways to join yourself back with your spirit, but when your spirit finds you it will either destroy you via kamikaze.
Undon's who can master their new abilities are called Hunters. Undon's who can't master their new abilities are called Wanderers.
Wanderers pay Hunters to find their lost spirit and bring it back to them.
The Angel or Reapers shape will be most likely what you fear the most, its original form will be the opposite sex of its master. I've sorta started in visualizing a plot of this. (I use names of friends and myself to save time. If I can't name someone I usually give it the name the first comes to my head).
Jando, a 16 year old boy just moved to Kaiton with his Uncle. On his first day at his new house he met two girls who lived up the street from him, Helen and Angie. They were so nice to Jando, giving him a warm welcome to this neighborhood. Sadly Jando didn't want to make friends but they gave him no choice. Jando didn't like being relationships as he knew all they were, were targets. Targets for his spirits to find and use them as bait. Yes, Jando is a Undon a hunter infact, he is the only one to have tore his Angel and Reaper out of him at the same time. It was a horrible experience, Jando wiped a whole town that fateful night. But when Jando laid there recovering from such physical exhaustion he found a way to join spirits with there masters and a way for spirits to become human. Not a day goes past when Jando doesn't think about his lost spirits, he doesn't really care about them as not having them both had released him for his need on being complete. He had no one to hold his limiters and thus being able to do stuff that you thought only God could do. Now Jando goes around finding spirits and returning them to their masters, giving them a letter with instructions on how to reunite.
Also as of today I don't have a title for this story yet. I would love to hear your ideas for a title. | |
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Alek Sugar Cookie
Number of posts : 2294 Age : 30 Location : A far away place xD Registration date : 2009-07-06
| Subject: Re: New Idea for a story. Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:53 am | |
| -Dies- Awesome Storyline o.o just a bit overreacted on my opinion :3 u will have to make more protagonists so the Story can get a bit more interesting on my opinion :3 ANYWAYS! MAKE A STORY BUT FINISH THE OTHER OE FIRST xD | |
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Jando Choco' Chip
Number of posts : 3892 Registration date : 2008-08-24
| Subject: Re: New Idea for a story. Sat Oct 17, 2009 12:01 pm | |
| eh, I've lost motivation for it.
Deamons. Angels or Reapers of absorb there master and become humans, gaining powers of not having limiters.
They are the bad guys of my story. | |
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