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PostSubject: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 9:11 am

GET READY PEPS FOR A SUPER MEGA MULTI CHAPTER USER FRIENDLY RATED M STORY OF EPIC PROPORTIONS! Or SMMCURFRMSOP (Smmmm-curf-msop)

Rated M for Sex, language and battles of mass destruction
Some ideas based on bleach and naruto o-o
The title Toratsume is 2 words, Tora meaning Tiger and Tsume meaning claw. TIGER CLAW! Very Happy
And this is a non realistic story derp. Also think anime, that will help.

Note: Plot won't start till around chapter 6-7, 1 - 5 is more of a intro to characters and hints about things and what not.

Chapter 1 - Bored
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Chapter 2: There's a first for everything
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CHAPTER 3: Super dream, super super dream, super
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CHAPTER 4: Dinner with friends
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CHAPTER 5: I hate monday's
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CHAPTER 6: Fight the power YA!
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CHAPTER 7: T.R.I.O THE POWER
CHAPTER 8: XIXON? WHAT?
CHAPTER 9: THE XIXECUTIONER
CHAPTER 10: DRAGON POWER, MAKE UP!
CHAPTER 11: THE SHADOW MAN!
CHAPTER 12: NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH
CHAPTER 13: WHEN BROTHERS COLLIDE
CHAPTER 14: ULTIMATE
CHAPTER 15: THE WINGED CRUSADER
CHAPTER 16: THE COVENANT
CHAPTER 17:


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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 10:22 am

Interesting Dream Jndow o-o

I would write one I had but its REALLY LONG (yeah longest I can rmmbr x-x)
and Im ot made of Writters wood too x3

GO FINISH IT NAOH! O:<
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 10:51 am

o-o 3.6k words and 11 pages long. THATS HOW LONG IT TOOK ME TO WRITE A LEMON! Fuck! Oh and also this is like 10% of the dream, I'm only really stealing the characters from it. WHACKED OUT DREAMS FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!

I have no idea when I will right ch3
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 12:49 pm

o-o''
-wats for Jndow to finish it x3-
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 4:01 pm

-yawn- After work maybe
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 6:35 pm

the entire time I was reading that, I'm sorry jando but I had to laugh.
Best hentai ever.
Girls don't actually like groping too much, but in hentais they do
9/10 for the best hentai ever
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 7:47 pm

Ragafa wrote:
the entire time I was reading that, I'm sorry jando but I had to laugh.
Best hentai ever.
Girls don't actually like groping too much, but in hentais they do
9/10 for the best hentai ever

As much as I hate telling u:

DAM U PERVERT! O:<

This time I won't do it x-x
(FORGIVE ME GOD! D:)

I kinda agree with Kish x-x
nothing else said................
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 8:35 pm

but I don't watch hentai for sexual entertainment, I watch it with friends after Helen gave me the idea, we laugh at how stupid it is D:
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 9:53 pm

Then I agree more with yah =P
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 10:48 pm

-selffacepalm-
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 11:37 pm

Sorry, been reading to much Lemon. Mainly bleach lemon to...Fuck there are some good Lemon writers out there, and the out of 5 of the Bleach Lemons I've read only 2 of them were written by guys.

Meh, Girls write way better lemons.

I just worked for 6 hours thinking about the next couple of chapters.

NOW TIME TO FIRE MA LAZORS AND CONTINUE THIS STORY!
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSat Mar 20, 2010 11:57 pm

Lol Jando... were you having a wet dream or something?!

And yeah girls wouldnt normally cum just by groping in that way.. and you wouldnt really be able to tell if they were wet just by looking at their underwear, unless they came or peed themselves or something... but yeah, I agree, its good for a hentai.
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 12:06 am

HENTAIIIIIIIIII !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

TRANSFORMATIUON!!!!!!!!!!

:3 ;3 :3

Nah, it was just a series of seriously random hot dreams that alway made me wake with morning wood and disappointed. It never went past 2nd base in these dreams. So now I'm taken what 10% of it and making a story out of it. Changing a few things around aswell cause ofc since the dream made me out that I was like 26 or something and 2 of the girls (one being Sarah in this story) were my roommates. More like fuck buddies but without the fuck. Some got really messed up aswell. Like literary fucked. up
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 1:03 am

I don't think we want to know your wet dreams dude...
This is what happens when you don't have sex but really really want it, you start believing your imagination D:
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 2:49 am

BAH! THIS LEMON IS TO SOUR!

i dont even like lemon. Meh. -gives up mainly due to Kish's negativity-
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 3:14 am

Not negativity, disgustedness.
I would have enjoyed it more if you didn't tell me they were a wet dream where you got morning wood... I don't want that picture in my head thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 3:32 am

To be honest the only reason why I read it was because I thought it had something to do with actual lemons, as in the fruit
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 4:58 am

No wet dreams, just wood. Hmm...I might give this another go. I want to write lemon, a new one. Maybe....it won't be based on anything you guys no about.
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 1:23 pm

I never knew Janda was THIS horny O_O........ Nice story though LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 9:38 pm

Neither did i Alex neither did i
o___o;

Its getting to the point wheres its getting a tad disturbing e_e;
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeSun Mar 21, 2010 9:43 pm

o___o;

e_e;

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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeMon Mar 22, 2010 5:14 pm

blaze7734 wrote:
Neither did i Alex neither did i
o___o;

Its getting to the point wheres its getting a tad disturbing e_e;

Alek Agrees with Larz too..... mhmmm
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeMon Mar 22, 2010 6:08 pm

I ment THAT alex but w/e <_<
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeMon Mar 22, 2010 6:46 pm

LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Toratsume   Toratsume Icon_minitimeMon May 10, 2010 3:45 am

o-o I just read this and loved it. Loved it in the sense of the style of writing >.>
Anyway, I've just written half of ch 3 and ima post it when I'm finished.
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