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PostSubject: THE THING IN THE FOREST PART 2   Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:38 pm

Well I finally have to motivation to continue this story. HERES PART 2

Has the usually spelling and of course grammar mistakes.

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People stare at the women who had appeared before their eyes, even though the entrance to the haunted house was creepy it was a popular place for teens to hang due to Adults having bad memories of the place. A cleric who just came back from training stares at the women, her legs were crippled and look liked they have been beaten repeatably with a sledgehammer. He cringes as he remembers a certain movie that contained that very scene. He walks up to her and kneels down beside her.

"Hey Ms? Are you alright?" He asks nervously as he never excepted to use his first aid this early in his cleric training. The young boy feels his body shake nervously, no one around him even bothers to help him. He is frustrated by the lack of help he gets and takes a deep breath to calm himself. He goes over the steps repeatedly that Master Grendal showed him.

The eerie feel to the haunted mansion made even being in its presents was enough to scare most people off, the internal night, the scary looking tree's and most of all the hollowing wind. The teenagers that mainly hang here are more of the emo types, which gives Jay an uneasy feeling as being surrounded by people who praise the Devil. He looks at the unconscious rangeress thats lying in front of him. He needs to get her into the City so he able to get more help as his weak healing skills aren't effected against her fatal injuries.

A car pulls up in front of the mansion and Lita Lawlass steeps out and runs to the women lying down and notices the cleric standing at her side, female sniper is with Lita. "Sarah!" The female sniper yelps out as she sees her friend unconscious, she runs to her and falls down to her knees so she can hold Sarah's hands. She thought the her friend would of been alright, that monster wasn't able travel that far away from its nest, tears started to pour from her eyes as she feels guilty as she looks at her friends legs, crippled and mangled in a horrifying way. Jay looks at the sniper who is crying all over the women that is lying before him which makes him feel sad to see such a pretty face cry.

Lita analysis the situation, as she witnesses the sniper mourn for her friend. We were to late Lita grits her teeth. As she remembers back when the young sniper women ran into her office to say that her friend was missing in the forest. She still couldn't get the feeling of dread when she said what part she was seen last in. "Lets take her to Kerning Hospital" Lita orders and 2 officers come out from behind her with a stretcher. As the officers gentle move Sarah to the stretcher, Lita talks to Jay.

"When did you find her?" Lita ask with a pen and a piece of paper ready. Jay looks nervously at powerful women before him.

"About ten minutes ago" Jay responds as he recalls seeing the crippled rangeress for the first time laying there.

The officers finish securing the mangled rangeress into the vehicle, the female sniper sits beside her with worry written all over her face. Lita gets on the other side of the unconscious women as the Officers take the 2 front seats and start the vehicle to head to Kerning City. Jay watches till the vehicle is out of sight and lets out a sigh and decides to head back to the city, this place was giving him the creeps.

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Alice roars, ramming into trees and knocking them over. It had been a while since she was free again. A mysterious person walks up behind her and she doesn't notice the human as she is to busy destroying the path in front of her.

"The great Alice, Mama Bigfoot of all bigfoot" The man says with a hood covering his head. Alice turns around, the sound the he made immediately makes Alice aware the he is edible, she is very hungry.

She roars and readies to stand pied, the man dressed in a black cloak pulls out his sword out of his sheathe that rested on his back. He smirks as he readies his stance as the wild monster before him charges head on. You would have to be insane to even think on fighting against such a creature.

Alice charges, now that she is not blinded by a lollipop, she is able to run a horrifying speed. The smirk on the man's face is still there. The forest crashes as miniature earthquakes awaking the forest in a stir of uneasiness. She is about to bull dose the man to a pulp before....

The man strikes, the first one across the chest of the beast and the next across the left foot, incapacitating it of its use. The beast fulls and gives a final quake not of power and destruction but of fear. The man looks at the beast disgusted that it was no challenge, he picks up the foot and teleports somewhere unknown.

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The doctor gives a grim face to Lita and says that the poor Rangeress has lost to much blood to stay alive and even she had a chance of leaving she would permanent stuck in a wheelchair. Lita's heart sank when she heard, she didn't want to tell the Sniper women who only knowing her for short amount of time loves her friend very much. She opens the door to the room to give the heartbreaking news to the depressed Sniper.

Lita hugs the poor girl as she starts to weep again and say "its all my fault" repeatably. The nurse says whispers to Lita ear that the two of them have to leave. Lita manages to walk to shattered girl out of hospital, Jane Deo glares at them jealously.

Meanwhile back in the room the nurse unplugs the life support and puts a sheet fully over the half dead half unconscious red hair women, it would be a miracle if she wakes up and even then it would be no fancy life to live. She locks up the room and leaves.

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The man sits on top Bigger Ben and looks down at the city, with Alice's left foot in his hands. He decides to write a note and attaches it to foot and teleports to the door of Lita Lawlass' office and leaves it there while quickly making his for Kerning city. He needs to save a certain someone.

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D: WHO IS THIS MAN!!?!!!?!!?!! WHAT DOES HE WANT WITH SARAH?!?!?!?!? FIND OUT ON THE NEXT INSTALLMENT OF THE THING IN THE FOREST
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PostSubject: Re: THE THING IN THE FOREST PART 2   Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:54 am

D: No one read this?
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