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PostSubject: The Thing In the Forest.   Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:32 pm

BEWARE OF SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES!
~Bored at 2am~

The stars shone bright in the dark dark sky, but they could be seen through the thick forest trees that make up the Phantom Forest. Giant monolith buildings they looked like, there red branches caught the full moon's glow and made the forest floor glow red. A sinister red.

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Sarah hurried through the red forest in a panic, sweat dripped from her pale skin, her rosy checks weren't rosing anymore as terror ran though them. Sarah kept looking back to see if anything was behind her, this made her trip over the vines that were scattered across the Phantom's Forest Floor.

Sarah was losing breath, she couldn't find an exit. Tears begun to appear at the bottom of her eyes. She didn't want to die. No matter what though Sarah still ran.

A ghostly figure popped out in front of her, it scared the living daylights out of her and she threw an arrow at it, not having time to un-sheath bow. The jr.wraith-now with arrow impaled through its face-vanished, the white cloth covering it glided gently to the ground. Sarah didn't see or take notice on the jr.wraiths death, she just kept running.

Her mind was racing as she kept racing though what seemed to be an endless forest. Dam you Claudia, You said it was safe to hunt Headless Horseman. Sarah thought of her friend as she sprinted through the forest, trying to dodge the web of vines that covered the ground. She felt her heart beat, she thought she was gonna chuck it up.

Finally after what seemed like a eternity she had to stop, Sarah tumbled to ground, landing on her knees and arms. Her lushes red hair hanged down, pieces of hair attached themselves with the sweat Sarah emitted to her face. She gasped for her, never had she have to run that fast before. Sarah looked back to see anything was there. Sarah saw nothing, just a endless spiral of red. Sarah looked up ahead of her, still a spiral of red.

Sarah turned herself around and leaned against the tree trunk, thinking she was safe now. She saw jr. wraiths encircle the area surrounding but they would disappear. Sarah looked through her inventory, she took out potions of all different colours and size's. Green, Pink, Purple, white. Then She started to pull out what looks like pills, finally Sarah found what she was looking for, a return scroll. She packed her inventory back up and readied the return scroll. She sighed with relief as, time to get out of this place.

A spit of light appear from the scroll, then it sparked into flames, making Sarah dropping the scroll. Then at the same moment a wild roar came from the distance. Sarah's heart sank, her eyes widened, fear crossed through Sarah body like water into a bowl. She was so scared that she couldn't even move. Loud hammering footsteps echoed through the red forest. All Sarah could do is just sit where she was, she didn't have the will to move, she wanted to but couldn't! The footsteps got louder and more frequent as if this thing was running, then it would stop as if this thing stopped moving.

Sarah focused, she had to get out of her, she didn't want to die. She tried to get up, but her legs were caught in the vine. oh no. Sarah turned her head to see a Phantom tree; they liked to make there prey immobilized so that they monsters of the forest can devour them quickly and easily, once that was done it would absorb the carcass into the vines giving it energy. The tree wrapped its vines around Sarah's hand before she could anything and then around her stomach. Completely immobilizing her.

Tears started to erupted from Sarah's face. She was going to die.

Sarah closed to her eyes, to make what seemed the end painful. The footsteps grew louder and louder until she could feel them. It felt like someone was taking a large hammer and banging it into the ground over and over again, and when it stopped you couldn't stand not knowing when it will happening again. Sarah heard laughter, laughter of a leprechuan. It spoke in the bizarre language that they speak in.

Sarah felt the stomps of feet getting closer and closer to her. Then nothing, 10 seconds passed, 20, 30, 40, 50..a minute passed. Sarah couldn't take it, she opened her eyes only to scream in horror as the thing was staring at her. The leprechuan who was dangling the candy on a fishing line laughed hysterically. It then spoke human "Tetetehehehehe, alice do you see that, that is a human" The thing made a noise, the thing was growing excited. "Alice" The Leprechuan spoke human again "Alice, kill the human."

Sarah couldn't move, her arms and legs wrapped around the vines of a phantom tree. Staring at this great beast, the tiny arms. The massive feet. What was she going to do.

The monster pulled back, and raised its left foot, readying it to crush Sarah's leg. Sarah laid there helpless, petrified that it had to end this way. Tears did not stop running down her face. The monsters lowered its massive foot. Sarah felt what it was like to have legs for the last time before they were going to be crushed. She closed her eyes tied and clenched her jaw. The massive foot crashed into the ground. Cracks of bone could be heard. The pain was to much for Sarah and she screamed out, she never felt anything like it. It felt like someone just threw a 10 tonne rock on your legs.

Sarah stricken by pain, passed out. But before leaving she said "goodbye...everyone"

The Rangeress, laid there helplessly. The monsters howled in enjoyment as it moved towards the rangeress' head. Rising its massive left foot again. If the monsters foot made contact with the rangeress' head, she would be dead. The monster howled and stomped its foot, crashing down hard into the ground. No bone breaking sounds were heard though. The beast lifted up its foot and moved back. The rangeress' was gone. The Beast grew angry and the Leprechuan lost balance and fell of. The monster then ate the Leprechuan and stormed back of to its nest.

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ZOMG WHO SAVED SARAH? AND HOW SO FAST? FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON "THE THING IN THE FOREST"
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PostSubject: Re: The Thing In the Forest.   Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:15 am

Why has no one replied?
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PostSubject: Re: The Thing In the Forest.   Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:02 pm

i musta missed this post =o
i liked it, make ze sequal :3

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PostSubject: Re: The Thing In the Forest.   Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:44 am

I'll make the squeal when I'm bored at 3am again. Other then that, you must wait.
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