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Jando
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PostSubject: Prologue~   Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:14 am

I was shocked to what I heard, I felt the rain touch my skin. It was dark and I was scared. People were running after me. My tears blended with the rain. Why? Why was this happening to me, why do they want me dead?

I ran into someone, i feel to the wet ground with a thump, my backside becoming cold and soggy as I touched the soaked gravel. I looked up. "Brother?" "Brother! You got to help, they trying to kill me!" I screamed, I didn't want to die.

The figure pulled out a sword and poised it to my head. My heart sank into despair, what was going on. I quickly got up and ran as fast as I could, eyes closed. No one wanted me and didn't know why. I felt my leg catch something and soon I was in the air falling into the ground.

I slid through the mud, I didn't care to get up, I didn't even know who to call out for. Father, Mother, Brother, they all wanted me dead.

"Weak child, why do you cry?"

A voice popped into my head. "Who's there" I opened my eyes to see if anyone was there but all I heard were footsteps heading my way.

"Haha, so fragile...wouldn't it be easier for me just to take this burden away from you?"

This dark sinister voice of a women was eroding me.

"Don't be like that, sure they want to kill you but you can still fight. Be a man"

A second voice? what was going on, this one sweet and sounded reassuring. I felt confidence to rise up.

"Oh come on, you really thing this boy can stand up against all these people. They have weapons, let me take over and I'll be sure to keep you safe"

"No, don't let her words entice you. She's trying to escape."

What was going on? These voices. They kept arguing till I couldn't take it anymore. But before I could scream out I felt something pierce me. I looked down from where I was kneeling and saw the tip of a sword covered in blood. My blood. I didn't dare to turn around. I felt darkness sweeping over and then a flash of light and then I saw nothing.

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Meh I was bored.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue~   Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:41 pm

Woahhhhhh thats pretty good
whats the full story?

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PostSubject: Re: Prologue~   Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:51 pm

He dies and a cat poops on him. Sad

nah I'll finish it later probs.
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