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 Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1

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PostSubject: Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1   Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:12 am

Jando had to use his spear to hold his ground, he had never been hit with such a powerful attack before. “What is your name warrior?” Natasha said clutching Nis in her hands as she crossed them.

Jando was lost for words, he knew he wanted to say his name but it felt like he had just forgotten how to. “WHAT IS YOUR NAME WARRIOR?” Natasha repeated this time yelling, her arms were still crossed.

“Don’t be afraid Jando” The soft sweet voice of that of a females penetrated Jando’s confused mind, he grew to like this voice. “She may be strong but you are stronger Jando” The male voice spoke, his voice was much more serious then the females and sounded cold and bitter.

Jando felt the courage to speak again. “My name is Jando, Jando the Dragon Knight”

“I think this is the one Natasha” A voice shrilled from Natasha’s Bow.

Talking Weapons? Monsters becoming human? What was going on here? Jando mind was exploding with confusion, it made his head hurt. He couldn’t get it out of his head. “Focus Jando” The male voice spoke encouraging Jando.

Natasha yawned. “Your boring” Natasha turned and faced Jando’s friend and guild mates and poised Nis directly at them. “Let’s see if this does anything, Arrow Bomb” Nis absorbed the mana particles that surrounded Natasha and unleashed a bright flash.

An Arrow flew elegantly across the damaged town of Leafre and towards the guild, who stood there frozen in fear. They were all going to die and couldn’t do a thing about it. Ami chanted something that Angie couldn’t decipher and without a moment’s notice they were all gone. The arrow flew straight into Jando’s Hotel and blew up as it touched the ground causing a small explosion, destroying the house that Jando once slept in.

Jando felt relief; he didn’t want to attack Natasha whilst angry and focused on that attack as it drew closer to his friends. He didn’t know what Ami did, but whet ever it was he was grateful.

“hmmp” Jando’s stood up, not needing the spear to hold him anymore and pointed it to Natasha.

“Finally” Jando said with a sigh of relief.

“Huh?” Natasha turned her head to Jando, seeing his fairfrozen pointed straight at her.

“Now that they are gone I can attack you with all my power” Jando said confidently, gripping his spear tighter. Natasha turned her body and faced Jando “all your power? You mean the power you attacked my brother with?”

“No, even greater” Jando smirked.

“Why did you then hold back against my brother? That’s rude you know” Nis was lowered and Natasha returned with her arms crossed.

“I didn’t want to hurt my friends” Jando spoke as if that was his purpose.

“Your friends you say? Hmmp, then Jando please show me all your power” Natasha uncrossed her arms and readied to attack. Jando put his right leg forward and charged bringing his arms behind him. He closed in onto Natasha and drew his spear clenching it with both hands as he brought it closer to her. Natasha simply put Nis in the way.

There was a clang of metal as the two weapons struck each other. Natasha lazily moved her eyes so that her eyes met Jando’s. “Pathetic” Natasha flung Nis upwards sending Jando up into the air. Natasha teleported and appeared just above Jando. She waited till he came closer; Jando with the wind knocked out of him couldn’t do a thing and was slammed again by Natasha and headed towards a building. He closed his eyes bracing himself as he drew closer and closer.

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Helen woke up, she thought her head would be hurting but to her surprise it wasn’t. Her vision was still a bit blurry but managed to see a figure lying next to her. She rubbed her eyes with her hands and was able to see clearer. She noticed Kish, she didn’t worry as he was snoring like a balrog. She smiled but her smile didn’t last as she remembered what happened.

What happened to Manon? Her mind was in torment as she began to panic; she got up and headed towards the exit of the house she was in. She walked only 2 full strides when she was suddenly pushed back by an invisible barrier. It hit her hard and kind of hurt, she rubbed her head and pulled herself off the ground. Helen was confused on why there was a barrier she got up again to analysis it, she found out it was dome and thus why she hit her head. Stupidly she touched it again, this time she landed on Kish.

“PIKACHU!” Kish screamed as his upper body went straight up as Helen landed on him. Kish looked down to see Helen, clueless on why she was on his lap. Helen opened her eyes and saw that Kish was staring at her.

“Hey Kish, glad to you your up” Helen said as she got off him. Kish looked around the room, it was quiet, peaceful and through the windows he could see blue sky and fluffy white clouds.

“We still in Leafre?” Kish asked.

“Yea” Helen replied trying to understanding why Kish asked such a obvious question.

“Strange, the clouds were grey when I woke up” Kish looked around the room. “You woke up?” Helen wanted to ask something else but this was the best she came up with.

“I can’t tell how long ago it was but I woke up seeing Kevin mixing something, I said final fantasy out of amusement and fell back down and faked being asleep. I overheard Kevin talking to you as he treated your wounds, but before I knew it I fell back asleep” Kish had his arm above his head and starching that back of his head closing his eyes and smiling.

Helen stared at Kish with a troubled look (lol f3) and told him that we were in a barrier and that she had just woken up.

Kish turned his gaze and away from Helen when she finished speaking, he looked where he saw Kevin at the time he woke up earlier. He wasn’t there now.

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Jando could feel the wind rush passed him as he did nothing to stop the collision of him and the building, happen. He felt the pain as he crashed through the roof and held his sphincter as he was moments away from clashing against the ground.

There was no crash and Jando just felt himself lying on something, he opened his eyes to see nothing and was surprised. He heard cracking noises and saw cracks appear out of nowhere; soon Jando saw a dome shape covered in cracks till it just shattered into a million pieces of mana and disappear.

Jando fell but rather feeling the connection of him and the Leafre soil, he landed on something hard yet soft, his head landed on something extremely soft and it made Jando want to sleep, till.

A slap came across and made contact with Jando’s cheek, this made him jump up on to his feet, he notice he had landed on Helen, and those soft things were her breasts. Jando’s face went red with embarrassment, Kish turned seeing the shattered barrier disappear and the sudden change of Leafre. It was quite shocking.
Kish looked at Jando with a surprised face and Helen with an aggravated one. “Damn you Jando, how many times have I told you? My Breasts are not something you can use a pillows” Helen turned away from Jando shunning him while holding her breasts.

Kish lost interest as something caught his eyes, he turned to see a someone lying on the floor unconscious, it was Kevin. “Kevin!” Kish yelled and teleported towards him, landing just before his head and nudging his shoulders with his arms. Helen and Jando looked at the what-seemed-to-be dead priest.

Jando’s focus left the reunion of his friend and went back and focused on the battle that was at hand. He bit his tongue, how could he forget that he was in a fight. Jando spoke for the first time in what seemed in ages to his friends “Quick, you must get out of here.”

“Why do you get to boss us around you pervert” Helen said obviously still angry at Jando. “Dammit Helen this is no joke, you have to get out of here now!” Jando’s voice rose.

“How dare you yell at me!” Helen had her finger pointed at Jando, she was on her period. Jando bit his tongue a second time. “Kish take Kevin and Helen to the ship and get away as fast as possible” Jando tried to ask Kish. Kish had many questions he wanted to ask but didn’t know which one to ask first.

“So Jando are you just gonna stand there with your friends and forget all about me?” Natasha spoke, It had been 5mins and yet she had did nothing. For some reasons she enjoyed over hearing their conversation.

Kish and Helen turned their heads towards the voice and then to Jando. “Who is that?” Helen retorted. Jando thought carefully at his next words, “She’s that Manon (you faced off with a couple of days ago) brother, and is the reason why I want you to take Kevin to the ship and get away from here.

Helen just realized that Jando had cuts and bruises around himself. She agreed and walked to Kevin, put her arm against Kevin's stomach and in sync Helen and Kish teleported and left Jando in the house alone.

“Look in your bag Jando” Jando heard the female’s voice in his mind, Jando reached towards his in bag and felt the coldness of a glass bottle, he pulled it out and smiled as he saw what it was; A Naricain Demon Elixir. “Thank you” Jando didn’t know how to reply to these voices so he tried the only way he thought was best. The female voice giggled and vanished.

Jando grabbed the lid, turned and chucked it away and skulled the oozy purple liquid down his throat. He tasted the dry, sour and bitter liquid as it passed his throat and felt it rushing through his body. It made him thirsty.

Jando closed his eyes and clamed himself, wanting to savour the outburst of energy for Natasha. Holding his spear in one hand and unsheathing his surfboard from his back, he turned towards the direction Natasha was in and charged.

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Authors note: No major battle in this scene, yes this is only a scene from chapter 6. We still have 2 epic battles to be done. This will be the biggest chapter to date as this is already 1.7k words long. This is probably the 1st ¼ of it. I am so excited to get this chapter done as I am in love with the storyline of it. I’ve pre-visualised this chapter about 3 times already and possible will do more as I get closer and closer to the most epic bit. After this battle a sense of storyline will appear but not likely till maybe next book?
Meh well I’m tired, gonna grab some Z’s and work on this after I get back from work tomorrow Very Happy

Also thank you to Kish who gave me excellent advice and spacing my writing. (Makes reading this so much easier).
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1   Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:44 pm

-no words-

WTF WEEE Puke Tralala Woosh Hawt 9000

-Try to express that^^^^^^ wit sum words xD-
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1   Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:23 pm

I'm gonna read it tonight, but I don't think you understood my paragraph lesson
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1   Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:52 pm

Ragafa wrote:
I'm gonna read it tonight, but I don't think you understood my paragraph lesson

Its more how the guy who wrote Revolt of the archers then how you showed me.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 6 – Natasha’s Finest Hour, Please hold on Helen – Part 1   Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:46 pm

iAlexxx! wrote:
-no words-

WTF WEEE Puke Tralala Woosh Hawt 9000

-Try to express that^^^^^^ wit sum words xD-



Umm ok.. So you were like OMG!!! SWEET!!! ewww.........! Oooooooo..!!! Yay!!!! :3!!! ITS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!
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