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PostSubject: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:48 am

I just improvised an entire story, it may be a little weird, but imagine i was saying this around a campfire;
telling mi storeh of teh teemz thet pesst

Helen says:
*yeah basically, there are like 0 AM past 80
*there are none of my BL
*I'm the only one in our guild
*depressing f4
*I feel like I have no one to exchange stories with
Kish ~ Echoed -~- Sick; want to stay home D= says:
*stories?
*like...?
*So there I was
*Neck and Neck with a Kent
*I looked at his eyes
*He looked at mine
*I threw the first hit
*a carefully aimed Cold beam
*HIT
*He became enraged
*and his red fur began to stand on end
Helen says:
*EXACTLY LIKE THAT
Kish ~ Echoed -~- Sick; want to stay home D= says:
*The Kent's eyes burned just like its element
*I teleported towards him
*He threw he spear at me
*but missed since I teleported out of the way JUST in time
*I teleported behind him and began charging my Ice Strike
*when he turned around and stomped me down his his front legs
*I was trapped under his legs
*He pulled another long spear from his endless sheath
*and prepared to strike it through my head
*I reached for my wand, it was an inch too far
*I was defenseless
*I could see nothing
*I had lost...
*The Kent Seemed to Hesitate
*but I realised he had been frozen
*because behind the powerful kent
*stood Graffle; impaling the kent with her wand
*she teleported past
*grabbed my wand
*and Charged her Blizzard spell
*the Kent, worried for his own life threw me to the side and began charging towards Graffle
*I was too weak to get up, but I saw Graffle strike the Spell from the heavens straight into the Kent's head
*The Kent had died
*...Like that?
Helen says:
*you are an incredible story teller, I didn't even want to interrupt
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:08 am

HAHAHA
that was the BEST
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:36 am

Part 2 please
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:39 am

part 2? the kent is dead o-o
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:48 am

You potted, regained your strength, when SUDDENLY MANON SPAWNED...

Kish GO
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 8:34 am

o__o;
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:31 am

Kish looked up to Helen who was majestically standing looking over the battlefield of over 15 dead kents. Kish got up still shaky after his experience with that one kent. Something was different about that one, Kish then remembered that moment when the kent was about to deliever the finishing blow. He remembered staring in to the beasts eye. Helen walked across in one fluent moment with teleport to Kish. Helped him and gave him a potion. "You gotta be careful Kish, don't underestimate Kents". "hehe thanks Helen" Kish said with one hand scratching the back of his head. "That Kent Helen...." "Hmm?" "That brief second when it was about to kill me, our eyes meet..." Helen stood in puzzlement "Kish lets go back to leafre and talk there". Kish still couldn't tell what what he sore in the Kent...the Kent looked terrified but of what?

"RAWR!!!!!!!!!!!!"

A missive roar shook the ground and a heard of kents came charging past Kish and Helen who were about to make there way back to Leafre. They felt chills as the ground shook with that might roar and were in a daze as they saw the countless colours of kents passing them in a panic. Kish suddenly knew what he saw in that kents eyes. It was fear. "KISH WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE....NOW" Helen screamed holding on to Kish. But Kish didn't move, he to now felt fear, the same as that one kent did. "KISH!" Helen started to cry as she knew what was approaching them. Kish broke out of his trance but it was to late. The deafening steps came closer and closer. Kish and Helen both sat there in fear, they didn't move, they didn't make a sound.

Jando was walking around crushing everything in site. He was so happy, not only was he on his 4th job advancement but he just got his Mark of Naricain. As soon as he equiped it he could feel the power of it rush through his blood. Jando was gonna go to Ludi and just buy a secret scroll, but he thought that would be to easy! he wanted a challenge. So Jando said out to find Manon and Griffey. As Jando walked to the field of blue kents he noticed something odd. The ground was so torn up with tossed up dirt that you think 1000 Kents rushed through here. Jando then heard a roar and knew that 1000 Kents did just rush pass here. Jando smirked and began to laugh as he pulled his spear off his sheath that was tied around his back. He could feel the icy blue energy flow threw him. The power was exhilarating. Jando then grabbed a cider out of his bag, drank it and felt his power increase even further. He then ate a speed pill feeling the effects of it immediately. Jando charged as the roar came over the deserted field. You could see it in Jando's eyes. He was excited.

Both of them sat there amazed at such sheer power this beast was giving off. How could one be so powerful? They bothed stared in awe and did nothing as the orange dragon noticed them. He see that they were meat and he was hungry for something else other then Kent flesh. He charged ready to kill them as if they were nothing but leaves on a tree. Kish sweating knew he had to do something. He could feel the pressure of Helens grip on his arm. She was petrified. Even though she was the legendary 4th job she knew she couldn't possible stand up to beast such this. The dragon was about to unleash a deadly fireball. Kish had to react. He had to! He watched as the fireball grew closer and closer feeling the heat of it as each milli-second passed by. He had to defent Helen...He had to defend himself.

"Magic Guard!" The fireball made contact with a barrier. Helen was shivering and Kish had one arm up holding his staff with the power of mana flowing through him and out on to the fireball. The fireball was to strong and broke Kish's barrier. Kish eyes widen in shock on how it could of broken his shield. A huge explosion occurred the moment the the fireball made contact with Kish. Both Helen and Kish were sent flying badly injured. Helen's grip faded and was sent in one direction while Kish was sent in another. Both to beaten from one attack they couldn't move. Helen reached for a Ginger Ale. Barely able to reach it. The great dragon took 3 massive steps towards Kish and was about to finish him in one final attack of scorching heat. It was Helen's turn to save Kish. She was able to grab the ginger ale and drank it. The taste was bitter and sour but she felt her life returning to her. She gave one quick teleport and yelled "Mana Reflection!" She appeared infront of Kish facing the dreaded dragon. A shield of 9 small pentagons appear creating one large one. The dragon roared and a burst of flames came out of his mouth. Helen found it hard to continue this block. Mana reflection wasn't meant to be used like this but she knew if she put enough power into it would surpass.

Helen grew tired, she was using both her hands and couldn't grab another ginger ale. She couldn't hold mana reflection up longer. It was delfecting it biut only that. She still felt the intense heat and was sweating badly as the strain of this was unbearable. She couldn't hold it. Tear begun to appear from her eyes and ran down her cheeks. "I'm sorry Kish I couldn't save you this time".

"DRAGON!!!!!!!"
A figure came bursting into the area of this one sided battle. The sun shining bright as the warrior's spear glowed with blue fury. The mysterious figured land ed.
"FURY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
At that moment a flash of blue energy was released from the spear and forced its self into the ground. The ground shook in discomfort and tore apart as a the energy wave swept through the land as it was butter. The wave of pure blue came crashing into the side of the great dragon who was breathing a forceful fire breath onto a mage. It took the dragon off guard and made the dragon lose his breath. The mage fell to the fall and passed out.

The figure stood up, the glistening blue spear of ice in one hand which pointed at the great dragon. The dragon shoock of the discomfort of this pain and turned towards the attacker. "Hmmp, so I found you...Manon" Jando eyes were full of dertermination and had a smirk that saw that was going to enjoy this battle. Jando rushed towards Manon holding the spear like it was a two-handed weapon. Manon took on this challenge and charged towards the spear wielding figure. Manon's claws a blazed with fire ready to strike his opponent. They were about to clash. It was spear vs claw. Ice vs Fire Jando roared "Dragon Fury!!!!!!!" and the same blue energy swept over the spear of pure ice and clashed with Manon's claws of fire. The impact of these both elements were catastrophic and both were sent back even though that Manon was much bigger then Jando. "hmmp...you pack some power don'tcha?" Manon roared in anger. Having found someone stronger then him he was now determined in eliminating this thread. Manon shot 3 fireballs at Jando. With tremendous force and power the fireballs flew directly at Jando burning the grass along the way. Jando smirked...

"HYBERBODY!!!!!"

To be continued............


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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:14 pm

Rofl.... nice,..
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:58 pm

=O
This is intense! Do I really have to wait for the next episode?!
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:14 pm

jando.. did you really just voluntarily write an essay...........
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:24 pm

it was late and wanted to do something
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:41 pm

I'll fix the mistakes up later ~2000th post
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:24 pm

Grats o-o
now wheres part 3 =P
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:04 pm

Oh
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Gawd
O_O

THATS AMAZING!!! O_O

We could use that stry for the webcomic too O_O
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:40 am

maybes o.o I'm thinking of making it a flash o.o
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:24 am

The explosion cleared and Jando stood there without a scratch, a glowing aura around him. You could see the hyperbody energy flow off him. "ha is that the best you can do". Jando charged towards the prince of dragons. The shining ice spear in one hand. Manon and Jando's eyes meet. Manon smirked "You are to weak warrior!". Manon lit his claws alight and readied in a blocked position. Jando's eyes widened....Manon can speak human? He refocused. Drawing energy to the glistening spear that was shimmering at the sight of battle. "Dragon fury!" Jando swung the frozen icicle that he could his weapon. The impact of Jando's Dragon fury collied with Manon's blazing claws. "Whats wrong warrior? cat got your tongue?". Jando grunted and reached into his mouth and pulled out the cat who was holding on tightly on his tongue. Manon laughed. "So you can talk human. Thats a first, but no matter what I will defeat you!" Jando pointed to Manon. "HA! you think a warrior as strong as you can defeat me! The prince of Dragons!" Manon roared in laughter. Jando smirked and begun to charge again this time holding the frozen yet not cold spear in two hands. Manon grunted a begun to charge towards this warrior.

"Dragon...............Crusher!!!". The spear of pure ice lit with pure energy. The spear shrilled in joy. Jando and Manon's weapons meet. Manon's claws ablaze trying to hold back the screeching dragon that was before him. He never seen such a sight. How can a warrior command dragons? They both pulled off there attack and jumped back a fair distance. "You...you insect, you can control dragons" Manon said in digust. "hmmp, I am a Dragon Knight, using the power of dragons to obliterate my opponents. "Curse you, a weakling able to control dragons!" Manon roared violently throwing a wave of fire at a group of blood hards perched on tree watching the battle. "Booster" Jando said in a soft yet harsh voice. He felt the energy flow through his body, quickening his movements. He felt faster. Jando opened his eyes and charged for the angry orange dragon who laid before him. He lost concentrating and looked at the two figure who were on the ground unconsiounous. His heart sank. It was Helen and Kish.

Manon swung around, his tail elegantly flying towards the warrior who was in a trance at the two who were on the ground. Jando was hit head on by Manon's massive tail and got the wind knocked out of him and sent flying back to where he was only 5 seconds ago. He struggled to get up, finding it hard to breathe. "You...you bastard....you killed Helen and Kish" Jando said with a sad yet angry voice. "HA! killed, they are only unconsciounous you fool. Exhausted just by blocking my attacks! I would of cooked them and ate them up if you didn't show up" Jando's eyes widened. He grew angry...his friends were just gonna be this monsters dinner! his eyes start to water with tears trying to get out. "HAHA, how are you a warrior. Your here bowing to the great prince of all dragons crying! HAH. your not a warrior, your not even worth to be called anything! you are nothing" Manon was alight with laughter. "My one goal was to protect the ones weaker then me. That was my soul purpose. Now I can't do that!" Jandos's thumped the ground with a hard punch of his fist and his tears leaving his cheek and landing on the once lashes green grass now just soil, eating his tears as if they were just a snack. "You fail warrior" Manon saying in a serious tone.

Manon charged towards the warrior who is kneeling in pain. Claws a blazed again in the form of a fire sword. This was the finishing blow for Jando. Manon knew it. His spirit was crushed, His power was weakened. He was was wide open for Manon to strike. "Now you die warrior who calls he can rule dragons!"
Manon readied his claws as he approached the sobbing dragon knight. "no, this is where you die."


DRAGON......ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Manon eyes widened in shock as a purple energy aura erupted from Jando. It sent Manon flying back to where he once was. Jando got up. Clenching what thought to be a spear of ice. He eyes stricken with sadness and failness. "I will not....I will not be defeated...WHEN MY FRIENDS NEED PROTECTION!!!!!" Jando's energy level sky rocketed and caught Manon off guard. Manon was shocked as how this warrior could have such power still. He was still shocked on the last attacked. This warrior roared louder then him. Jando now filled with determination to kill this monster was not for the thrill of the battle but was now to protect his friends. He rushed towards the giant dragon who looked puzzled. "Dragon....Crusher!!!!' Jando roared as he charge his spear through the belly of Manon. Blood immediately gashing out of the wound. Jando stabbed Manon again then a 3rd time, completing his crusher. Manon stood coughing up blood with three massive wounds were the spear had penetrated him. "Curse you, CURSE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Manon's energy level's start rise. This caught Jando's immediate attention. A energy wave past through out the forest then a 2nd far more powerful wave past through scorching everything in sight in fire. Jando had to try block this inhumane power. Then 3rd wave past. This covering the whole forest in a thick red. Jando barely was able to block it.

Jando was able to see again. Helen and Kish were still alright. He saw two fairy's hovering over them. He knew they were the fairy's of Magic guard. He was glad that they were all right. He turned his head to face his opponent. The smoke cleared. Jando was immediately shocked. His heart sank on what he just saw. He couldn't believe it. Manon landed on the ground, his two touched and set about a meter of ground on fire. His hands were crossed and he had a determined serious look. Jando was amazed. Manon had become human.

Manon's tail swung freely as if it had a mind of its own. His wings glistening in the bright sun. "Ho...w? your..." "Surprised warrior? I am Omega Manon. Born from the breath of HornTail's middle head. I am the Prince of all dragons including Manon's. Pfft you thought i was just an ordinary Manon. My power level is surpassed 1000 Manon's fused together!. You warrior have no chance." Jando was still in shock on this transformation. Manon's top a blaze with fire, same as his pants and hair. He wore no shoes but they were stilled clawed. "how..ar..e...yo.u....human" Jando said with fear beyond belief. "HAHA! Me human, no. My father saw through humans and found out that they were stronger in human form. He made chosen Dragons have a human form but still have the features of a dragon, such as wings, tail, horns, claws and teeth. There are only two Dragons who can transform into this human form." Jando's eyes widened. "TWO? who is the other one. Tell me!" Jando gripped his spear. " Haha, hmmp I'll tell you who the other one is if you can defeat me" Manon's eyes were blazed excitement. He pulled out a burning katana from the sheath that was on his back and held it on hand. "GO TO HELL WEAK WARRIOR!" Manon's eyes made Jando cringe, how could one be so powerful. Manon charged. Jando couldn't see where he went cause he was so fast. Manon kicked Jando.

Jando was sent flying. He landed in with a huge crash. Birks looked at the mysterious figure who crashed into there graze. Jando weakened and had one eye open. Blood was dripping from his mouth and mild grazes were all over his face. From one kick he was on the ground to bashed up to move or talk. All he did was stare into the blue sky. A birk came up to him and baa'd at him. Jando looked at the birk. He smiled. He needed to win, but how? He was up against someone far more powerful then him. If he had berserk then he would be able to defeat him with ease. But he didn't. he then realized something and reached into his inventory and pulled out a Naricain Elixir. His smile became a laugh. Manon walked over to the what seemed a dead warrior surrounded by birk's. He was surprised that the birked didn't attack the fallen warrior. "So have you given up yet? one kick and your nearly de...." Manon couldn't finish his sentence and saw what that warrior had in his hand. His eyes widened "NO! NOT A NARICAIN ELIXIR". Manon now heard Jando laughing. Jando took the top of the elixir and begun to drink it. Manon stood there frozen. He could of quickly killed him. But he knew that this warrior would nearly x10 stronger then he is now. He froze in excitement as the warriors thirst consumed the elixir. Jando felt his wounds heal up, his energy came rushing back in. He felt power beyond all. He felt ALIVE!!! The icy spear was now screeching in happiness. Manon prepared for the worst.

Jando opened his eyes and a gush of energy rushed through the valley. The scared birk's ran off baa'ing in fear. Jando eyes blazed with purple energy, his power was beyond belief and Manon started to laugh. "Yes! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR! A CHALLENGE!" Jando stood up. "This is where you die Omega Manon"

To be continued......
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:56 am

WOW
WOWOWOWOWOW
hahaha, so worth the all morning wait! I feel like this is Harry Potter. J.K. Rowling produce MORE NOW.
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:34 pm

GraffleFraff wrote:
WOW
WOWOWOWOWOW
hahaha, so worth the all morning wait! I feel like this is Harry Potter. J.K. Rowling produce MORE NOW.

Yeah what Helen Said! O_O
Thats amazing x_x
Kish u shouldhelp too F3 so..
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:49 pm

iAlexxx! wrote:
Oh
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O_O

THATS AMAZING!!! O_O

We could use that stry for the webcomic too O_O
Dont cha think? Very Happy

we could do that i need to start working on it to tell the truth -_-
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 9:23 pm

mojare 2.0 wrote:
iAlexxx! wrote:
Oh
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O_O

THATS AMAZING!!! O_O

We could use that stry for the webcomic too O_O
Dont cha think? Very Happy

we could do that i need to start working on it to tell the truth -_-

I could start it for ya, ive already got a folder full of sprites, BG, and whole crap load of stuff
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:46 pm

you should make this into a video or a comic or something, i just read a little bit of your first post, you are actually a really good writer. i really underestimated you...
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:36 am

O.O You underestimated me? meh

Bah! I've dragged this on to much. Already got part 4, 5, 6, 7 planned out f3f3f3f3
Part 4 maybe done by tonight. Part 5 and/or 6 maybe done 2morrow morning when i'm getting leeched o.o
-if you don't know yet this story is based on iJando's 4th job advancement.
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:36 am

There was a gush of wind as Jando vanished. To quick for Omega Manon to see. Next second later Jando reappeared with a fierce kick into Manon's back. Manon was sent flying crashing into the ground, causing the whole forest to shatter. Jando vanished again. Manon was hesitating to get up, how did he get so much power from drinking a Naricain? He pulled himself up. "Volcan....rise" the ground split open causing the heavens to shake, lava quickly made its way to the surface. Manon felts the heat and put his arm out over the crack. Lava spurted out like a geyser engulfing Manon's clawed hand. Jando watched in the distance and could feel the heat from the lava. The shimmering icicle that he was holding was having so much fun. That lava subsided and descended back into the earth. When Manon's hand was see-able it wasn't burnt but holding a lushes red double ended katana. This made his previous blazing katana look like a butter knife. Jando analysed Manon as he tested his new weapon out. They both vanished into the wind.


Over a period of about what seemed like a eternity but was only 2mins there were several shock waves through the Minar Forest. Caused by the super fast collisions that Omega Manon and Jando were creating with the elegant weapons clashing together. They weren't trying to kill each other during this period but more to test there skills. Manon was interested on how a Naricain Elixir was able to increase this warriors speed so much and Jando was interested on what makes him different to any other Manon. The testing lasted for 30 more seconds. They both landed with a fair distance separating them. "Tell me warrior. How does drinking a potion meant to dramatically increase your attack power increase your speed?" Manon stood there, with his double ended swords shimmering in the sunlight, soaking in the clashes it had with the enemy's spear of ice. "hmmp, you look so intelligent, Omega Manon. I thought you would know" Jando smirked. Manon gave a look of disgust, "Don't give me that crap, tell me! Or do i have to kill you?" "Ok then. If you happen to survive my next attack then sure I'll tell you" Jando now readied his stance and charged towards the mystical being that was Omega Manon, holding the shining ice spear like a 2handed sword. "Dragon Fury" Jando roared and swung the icicle now causing dark purple energy to unleash from it. Manon's eyes widened and braced himself. But Jando was not done yet..."Dragon Fury!" Jando swung his spear again causing the to dark purple energy waves to fuse and made the destructive way to Manon. Manon grunted "damn".

Manon took the dual Dragon fury head on. He struggled at maintaining his stance and was being pushed back by the pure energy that this attack had. He had to let it go but if took a hit it would badly injure him. Manon was panicking, how could he gain so much power from that elixir. Manon focused his energy and found a loop whole in the warrior's attack. He began to rip the dual furies from them fusion. He struggled as trying to separate this much energy was not an easy thing to do. He separated them. Causing the two furies to go right past him and explode in the distance. Manon re-equipped his dual katana. "Damn you warrior! Your not aloud to gain this much power with a Naricain. Its impossible" Manon was in a fury. His anger swept over and like a drug consumed his body. His muscle were increasing in size and his energy was being forcefully bumped up. Jando gritted. If he was going to defeat Manon in less then 4mins he was going to have to go all out. Manon charged in a furious burst towards the warrior.


Jando began to increase his energy to match Manon's so he could block his ferocious charge. There weapons collided, Jando couldn't match Manon's extreme energy and was forced flying through the forest clashing with trees till he came to a stop in a side of a mountain. It felt like he was snail and one of zakum's arms through him like he was a small pebble. Jando fell from his position in the mountain and landed on the ground. He underestimated Manon's power. Thinking he could match it? "what was I thinking" Jando whispered while facepalming himself. He didn't had much time, he had spent to much time observing Manon's power. He needed to win. If he didn't who would protect his friends? Jando pulled out his red surfboard that was sitting in its sheath on his back. He gripped it in one hand and held the icy blue spear in the another and charged. Manon who was still in a frenzy, charged towards the warrior. He laughed manically. His weapon had split into two separate entities and Manon was holding one in each hand. Jando focused. He was about to clash with someone much stronger then him. If he didn't something he would end up dead. "THIS ENDS HERE WARRIOR" Manon burst a sonic boom of flames and zoomed towards the warrior. Jando was amazed on how he can further increase his power. They were about to clash, thus ending Jando's live if he didn't do anything.


"Dragon Fury" Jando swung his red surfboard in one fluent motion. Dark purple energy rippling off it to form a wave of unstable energy. "Haha the same move wont work twice!" Manon cried out as he charged towards the dark purple energy wave that was coming his way. "Dragon fury" Jando swung his surfboard again unleashing yet another unstable wave of dark purple energy. It was much fast then the previous almost four times as fast. It collied with the first fury and they merged again just like they did when Jando used this attack before. Manon readied his stance, he knew the energy of this move and could tear it apart with ease. Manon and Jando's attack. There was a loud bang as the two powers collided, filling the forest with noise. Manon was struggling to block the dual fury. "Damn, how is this so strong?" Manon whispered to himself in shock. Manon couldn't tear the fury apart, sweat began to drip down from his face. "How could he make this attack so much stronger then the last." Jando appeared behind the defenseless Manon "It ends here Manon" Jando roared and striked down Manon with two words. "Dragon fury!" This time his spear participated in the attack as Jando held the surfboard and the spear together as if they were on being. Manon's heart sank. His eyes were wide with shock. Was this the end for me? Manon coped a direct hit from Jando's attack. He was sent flying into the ground. The Fury that he was blocking was still following, being powered by Jando's second fury. Mano's small life flashed before his eyes. The ground erupted as the falling dragon crashed into the forest floor.

The smoke cleared and Manon's energy level was gone. Jando had won. Jando descended to the crater that Manon left. His Naricain was nearly out. With only 1min left. He was glad he ended before it ran out. Jando put his surfboard and spear back in there sheaths. Pull out a honster and had a nice drink. He could feel his injuries vanish and life returning to him. He started to walk to Helen and Kish who laid helplessly in unconscious. He was thankful that Magic guard was still active. Jando smiled glad for them that there still alright. He fulfilled his purpose. He had protected them. Jando got to his unconscious friends and picked them over and threw on to his shoulders and headed to Leafre.

There was a huge explosion and a massive wave of energy engulfed all of leafre. People in all the way in orbis could feel this monstrous energy. Jando’s eye widened in shock. “no...it can’t be.” Jando put his two friends down by a tree and quickly pm’d Ami to come and get them. Jando pulled his two weapons from their sleep. He had only 40 seconds left of the Naricain and if that energy wave came from Manon he would be screwed.
Manon exploded out of the crater that Jando made for him. His left horn was missing and he looked badly injured. He was mad and wanted to revenge. Jando noticed Manon’s energy and prepared for the worse. He was to close to Kish and Helen. Jando quickly teleported away from the two unconscious figures that laid by the tree. He made quite a bit of distance from them so they should be alright. Should. Manon quickly made his reappearance. Even with Jando teleporting, Manon found him just as easy. Jando was scared. “This is incredible warrior. Never have I seen warrior this powerful.” Manon laughed manically while continue his charge towards the warrior. “Your speed is beyond that of a thief and you can teleport even though your not a mage, you truly are unbelievably talented.” Manon rammed into Jando who just hovered there in the air frozen by fear. He just had to keep Manon occupied till Ami go here and took Kish and Helen to safety. Jando was sent flying into the open sky.


Jando was immediately kicked, he thought he was safe for atleast .5 of a milli-second more. But he was wrong. Again he was kicked then punched. How long could he keep up? “Whats wrong warrior, given up? I guess that last attack drained you out of all your power.” Jando knew, he had to keep alive, just for a but longer. “Ami, where are you?” Jando was sent flying by a whack of Manon’s tail and crashed right near Kish and Helen. Manon drew his two katana’s and set them alight with fire and charged towards what he thought the defeated warrior.

Ami was nervously strolling back to leafre. She had just been training with a party at newts when she felt the inhumane power. She had been on unease ever since. Her phone beeped and she quickly grabed it. It was a pm from Jando. Ami had to read it two times before she understood it. Her eyes widened after reading it and became scared. She had to save Kish and Helen.


Ami quickly called Kevin and told him to meet her at the co-ordinates Jando told her. Kevin didn’t argue. Ami ran, teleporting anytime she could to get there faster. There was a loud crash when Jando made contact with the ground. Ami shrieked , she saw Jando all beat up and bruised. It gave her an uneasy feeling. She also felt the extreme power of the mysterious figure that was heading towards to Jando. “You made it Ami” Jando struggled to get up. Kevin appeared. “Take Kish and Helen to safety. Try to heal there injuries.” Jando’s face looked determined. Ami gave and order Kevin. Normally Kevin wouldn’t take orders just like that but this was either life or death. Kevin set up a mystic door by placing a magic rock and saying a chant and then helped Ami move the unconscious bodies through the door. Ami was about to go in. “Good luck, Jando”. Ami vanished through the door. The door then disappeared.

Jando threw his arm infront to him, his spear readied to block Manon’s attack. With only 10 seconds left of the Naricain it was now or never. Manon’s two katana’s were ready to give the final blow. Manon knew that Jando couldn’t survive much longer, one more hit and he would win. The Weapons clashed. Causing a echo of sparks. Manon’s eyes widened. “What the! How! You should be dead” “I’m sorry Manon, but I need to end this now” Jando started to overpower Manon’s kantana’s. Manon was blazed with fury. “I will not die, you are a human you hear me! A HUMAN! NO HUMAN CAN EVER KILL ME!” Manon increased his energy. Jando was still able to hold it. Manon’s heart sank on what happened next. His Katana’s broke in two.


Jando grabed him as Manon slipped from there clash. He threw Manon into the sky. Manon still shocked. “How could you have broken Volcan”
Jando threw his spear towards the soaring Manon. “Dragon Fury!” Jando swung his surfboard and unleashed a wave of dark purple coloured energy. It was going to consume the spear if it wasn’t stoped. All Manon could do was watch. Jando dropped the surfboard and teleported. He reappeared on this soaring spear of ice. It glistened in the sunshine. Jando was now flying straight towards Manon with a wave of pure energy behind him. The wave cought the spear and immediately the spears ascendance towards on what looked the frozen Manon. “Dragon Crusher” Jando spoke in a voice of pure power. The spear glowed and the same dark purple energy consumed the spear. “This is it Manon. Prepare to feel my strongest attack,

Furious Crushing Dragon.”

Jando’s attack pierced through Manon’s fierce skin. Blood burst out as Jando passed though. Jando’s Naricain wore off. Manon begun to fall. Memories fill his mind, good times, bad times, times of laughter, times of sadness, all emotions. What was this feeling? He began to fade as all monsters do when they die. “You win, warrior. My sister will be after you now” Manon was completely gone, only his tail remained and the Heroic Pentagon fell with it.

Jando could feel the awesome power of the Naricain leave him. His body became heavy with fatigue and he began to fall. He crushed into the ground with a thud. He refused the sleep that wanted to be consume him but he had to retrieve his surfboard. He slowly walked past Manon’s tail and saw the heroic Pentagon there as well. He smiled, he forgot that was the only reason why he came to look for manon. He picked it up. At that instant he remembered what Manon final’s words were “My Sister will be after you” Jando ignored it for now and put the pentagon in his inventory and stumbled towards his surfboard. He fell. His spear laid next to him and so did his pole arm. Jando was tired. He didn’t even say a word as he let the consuming unconsciousness known as sleep take over.

To Be Continue.....


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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:33 pm

Griffey next?
GRIFFEY?!
I hope there will be a happy ending Wah I always hated those bosses. They kill me allllll the time.
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PostSubject: Re: So helen and I were talking....   Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:28 am

Nope it's not griffey >_>

Well since I began this, I feel that I should be able to continue the story. You know… It’s pretty rude to get someone’s idea, and then make a sequel and think of a WHOLE collection without even asking for permission?
Next time, I’d prefer if you asked before you started.

I'm gonna allow you to continue, but anyone can write to it. You have to write to my story, as I wrote to yours.
If anyone wants to continue, they're allowed.
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