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PostSubject: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:06 pm

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Shaya stared at her enemy before her. Exhausted and with sweet dripping from her long black hair which was pulled back into a tight knot. She felt the adrenaline rushing through her bloodstream. She sheathed her blade from the demon sprawling to the ground dead with a massive wound through its chest. Only one minute ago, the entire field where she stood had been covered in demons, now it was a graveyard. Shaya took the feeling of excitement, the sheer thrill of what she had achieved, but it was not to last. Only a few seconds later, a hoard demons headed towards her, wanting revenge for their fallen comrades. She was going to enjoy this.
The war between Elves and demons had been raging since the dawn of time, and now the end is drawn to a close and our saviour has been chosen. She is one of main leaders of the Elves; Shaya had been trained since childhood. Now one of the most skilled in sword and hand-to-hand combat with agility beyond this world, she was the perfect warrior, and the Elves only hope as she was the chosen one.
The battlefield was like a desert, hot and dry, the clouds looking heavy with grief at the bloodshed and looked like that they wanted to weep, some grew angry about what has happen and started making echoing flashes appear, some even threw bolts of electricity to earth. They were not happy.
The hoard of demons, with their bloodthirsty and revengeful eyes, horned back, sword like tails swinging aimlessly while they were charging, with armoured helmets on their heads and deadly weapons equipped. The demons made all surrounding elves ran in fear; they knew they couldn’t defeat something like that. They all ran except Shaya, in fact she started running towards them, she drew out her two swords that were resting in the crossed sheaths on her back. As the first one came near she leaped right on to its head, she pushed the demon right into the ground, managing to strike it right through its back while she jumped again from the dead demon. She fell elegantly to the ground in a spiral formation so the demons around her were dead as she landed.
About 30 were dead all ready, the clouds couldn’t take it anymore and cried all over the battle field. Rain made the desert rock slippery and dangerous but it just cooled Shaya off. She stood there in the centre of about 1000 demons staring at her, holding one blade pointed to the sky and one blade pointed the ground, she ran straight ahead, slashing the first demon with the blade that was pointed to the ground, she swung stabbed the other blade into the demons chest, still not dead the demon grabbed hold of her and threw her. Shaya flew heading towards a demon about to catch her with its sword, but missed and instead he was falling to the ground with no head. Shaya skidded across the wet ground and sliced the legs of the demons in her way, she flung her sword into the ground and swinged herself into the air, and chanted “du ga kac er da”, immediately, there was a horrifying crashing, that sounded liked a women screaming, and it was. Shaya summoned the God of lightning – Thoress. She flew down and screamed again, all demons blocked their ears and shrieked in horror. Shaya grabbed onto Thoress and she flew back into the clouds. The demons on the ground were confused on what was going on and soon knew. About 2 seconds after Thoress flew above the clouds and the entire battle field was covered in a wave of electricity. The battle was over. Being able to summon a god, no elf can do that.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 8:03 am

he missed his medication? hold on let me check my clipboard...
hm your right, he was due to take it 6 hours ago. ok... hold still kish...
-gets big needle and injects with cookie dough-

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:40 pm

ill get the straitjacket <_<
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:44 pm

kay kish, its nappy time now o.o
would you like to go in the cheese room, or the sponge room?

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:47 pm

o.o
.....
-picks up fridge-
DONT MOVE OR ILL THROW THIS AT YOU DX
-holds like pistol-
-pulls cord-
-cheese flies out and hits larz in head-
-throws fridge at group-
-puts straitjacket on-
-gets bored-
-takes off-
-plays pokemon-
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 7:09 pm

KISH
NO
BAD KISH!
time out time >=|
go to the quiet room

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 02, 2009 10:37 pm

bleeeehhh
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:04 am

-watches while eating CARAMEL POPCORN!!! Very Happy-
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:59 pm

ew DX
why couldnt they just stick with the good ole fashioned buttered popcorn

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:45 pm

-throws butter over the caramel-
is that any better o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:09 pm

-trys one-
actually... yes o_o

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:52 pm

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

-buys new packet of Caramel Popcorn-
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aaaaaahhhh... this is the LIFE!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:38 pm

bah
i gotta go buy more sticks of butter now .__.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:30 am

hehe

suck! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:41 pm

bah i dont like popcorn that much anyway... unless its overly buttered
-i hide my own candy when i go to the movies- x.x


-goes to see hanna montanas career die-
someone illigally posted the movie on the internet B3

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:54 pm

I just buy an extralarge slurpee =/
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:05 pm

well i cant do that, since im usually always broke. and now that i have money, im restricting any uses of it so i can put it in my ferret funds.
plus, if i got an extra large slurpee, id have to get up to go to the bathroom like 20 times during the movie x.x

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:15 pm

BUT ITS CHERRIEEEEEEE D=
and...wait.....ferret fund?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:18 pm

if you read my post about ferrets, i said that i was saving up for one.
so yeah... my ferret fund xD
currently $18.00

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:20 pm

oh yeah........
*whisper* be sure it doesnt try to knaw your eyes out x__x
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:21 pm

but their cute harmless little...

...ok i cant even say that with a straight face x_x

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 2 – Battle at Desert Quiju (ku – ju) - My story thats for english that I though ppl whould like to read. (still needs more revising)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:33 pm

Rofl =P
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