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PostSubject: my first story post   Fri Feb 13, 2009 5:56 am

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there was two people, a boy and a girl, they had never met before. she from an upper class family, he, a lowly blacksmith's son. one day the boy heard about a masquerade ball and decided to go, he planned to put on a simple mask and sneak in from the back. while at the ball the girl was sitting on a balcony high above the party, as soon as the boy entered he saw her and fell in love with her. after the ball he watched as she got into her carriage and followed it all the way home. when he did he sat in the bushes waiting to catch a glimpse of her. he waited for what seemed like hours until he saw her in the window. so he picked up a handful of pebbles and threw them at her window, when she opened them she saw him and she too fell in love. the boy was stunned by her beauty, but the the girls father came out and yelled "stay away from my daughter", and threatened the boy with a sword. the girl started crying for for father to stop. he chased the boy away from his estate. the next night when the girl was in her garden the boy sneaked passed the guards and met her there but before she could say a thing he kissed her on the lips, embracing her as he did, and whispered "we mustn't speak because if they hear us we're dead". and that is how it started every night they would meet in the gardens and embrace each other, the girl would bring a lantern as a signal that it was her. but one night the boy didn't come , the girl waited and waited but he never came, but after 6 nights she gave up, until one day she saw him on the outskirts of town, and when she did she ran to him crying, and when she got to him she just hugged him crying "save me, i've been feeling so alone without you" but then the boy keeled onto the ground, the girl didn't know what to think, until the boy pulled out a ring saying "marry me and you'll never have to feel alone, cause loving you is all i know, i convinced your dad and we wed in the spring". and they spent he rest of their lives together in eternal happiness.






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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:30 pm

-replaces all of Vamps blood botles with cherry cool-aid- =3
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:00 pm

mmmm coolaid
-random coolaid add-
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:45 pm

-coolaid man randomly crashes through the wall-
BITCH YOU BETTER PAY FOR THAT DX

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Thu Feb 19, 2009 10:58 pm

*think cool aid guy is full of bloold* *drink all coolaid* TAKE THAT BICH *then suck riff's blood* fucking dino!
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:08 pm

o__o .......i think he's dead.
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:45 am

ouch?
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:18 am

-refills coolaid man with blue coolaid-
we need him to repay for this wall! DX

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:50 pm

i dont get it o.o
-slaps head when realising i ruined the tune-
btw, wtf is coolaid =.=
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:14 pm

basically american cordial (but its red) i dont thik its soft drink
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:45 pm

Uhhhhh zielo i think thats the wrong juice(blood) type =.=;;
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:13 am

ewww blue blood is expired blood, thats just gross!
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:14 am

isnt blue blood royal blood?
that means its sweeter o.o
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:15 am

oh yeah *starts drinking royal blood* i just realised how morbid my post r...meh
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:21 am

omg!!
omfg!!!
yay!

im not gona mind blood now...
COZ THEY'RE GONA LOOK BLUE TO ME!!!

thankz guyz!!!!

-hops happily to the ice-cream truck- Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:03 am

thats not coolaid DX
coolaid is basically a powder that you mix with water and you get a drink similar to fruit punch, but maybe a little less flavor, and with the choice of adding your own sugar. and it dosnt only come in red DX red is just the color you normally see in the commercials. it can be red, blue, green, purple, pink, yellow, and whatevar, with the flavor to match X_X

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:16 pm

Im pretty sure there isint yellow =.=
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:41 pm

ok so its similar to cordial, we put about a quater of this SUPER CONCENTRATED suger liquid and mix it with water.
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:21 pm

wtf is cordial? o.o
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:00 am

i think theres a yellow... =.=
well, theres lemonaid flavored coolaid anyway. wich kinda defetes the purpose of making it coolaid DX
theres also pink lemonaid coolaid >.>

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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:19 am

Ragafa wrote:
wtf is cordial? o.o

this?
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:42 am

-drinks-
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:29 pm

-passes out from drinking too much fancy juice-
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:47 pm

here rag have a beer instead =/
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:14 am

really? o.o
coz im sorta craving one
-drinks poison thinking its beer-
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PostSubject: Re: my first story post   Mon Feb 23, 2009 2:48 am

u dont no wat cordial is...? dumass =.=
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